Still: 2 birds

[kr3ml]

wow :surprised :thumbsup:

[mikepolizos]

That's a great render!
I love the details! Great Job
:applause: :applause: :applause:

[Anatoliy]

Thanks

[Misery]

The title is 2 birds,

where is the second bird, please let me know. the reflections of the bird too, where are they, if I was to see this in real life ther're would certainly be reflections? If not you;re cockpit, then place a branch for detail and make this bird scream. Interested it might be, yet no reason for it;s actions. Please develope further. Don't think this is bad though, Great render and Great jpb on bird model. Please just take it a little bit further.

[EF]

the second bird IS the airplane...

I love this piece...the bird (real bird) looks very cool..great texture.

[Anatoliy]

Of course, the second bird is the airplane

[emptyvoxel]

Originally posted by Misery
The title is 2 birds,

where is the second bird, please let me know. the reflections of the bird too, where are they, if I was to see this in real life ther're would certainly be reflections? If not you;re cockpit, then place a branch for detail and make this bird scream. Interested it might be, yet no reason for it;s actions. Please develope further. Don't think this is bad though, Great render and Great jpb on bird model. Please just take it a little bit further.

If you look in the top right corner, you can see that the cockpit is open (how else would the bird get in), and the glass there is reflective. The cockpit looks good to me, and I think the subject of nature's bird vs. the man-made bird is perfect, and any clutter going on outside the cockpit would detract from it.
I think the bird could really use a little more detail in the modeling. His profile is much too clean for a creature with feathers: give him some ruffles here and there, model in his eye and nostrils. Right now he looks very flat, like the bird shaped blob with a side-view projected texture map that he is.

Very nice work, but it just needs a little bit more detail in the bird.

-T

[JPPLAY]

This is front page quality make it so you don't have to click a link to see it just post it in first message. Great work.

[jdsb]

wow man,great render and texturing is great too,:applause: :drool:

[wellsae]

Interesting subject... my only crit is that the "real" bird looks too wooden, like it is a carved figurine rather than a live animal. Need some details like protruding feathers, etc...

~ Audrey

[Goatfuzz]

Nice bird... :beer:

-Good attention to details. By the way, what kind of a bird is it (the organic one that is ;)).

Edit:
- I agree with wellsae that protruding feathers would make the bird even more believable.

[Anatoliy]

Thanks to all

[shashhh]

great.....loved it......keep up the good work.

:buttrock:

[Wonderer]

Great birds! :applause:

[Kel Solaar]

nice work, very original, i like the concept :)

[ssyed]

Great render, the cockpit is perfect but 4 the bird i have some crits:

*Yes it looks wooden
* The neck needs more definition
* THe eyes if looking at the camera would be better
* The legs are tweaked out.. .kind of bent elastic not like real birds

*love the toes of the bird tho

[Anatoliy]

This is such kind of the bird with such neck and such legs, yes, maybe, the bent looks like elastic, but this bird have such legs. The bird looks inside the cockpit specially, because the bird is interesting for it.

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