Character+environ: Solitude

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:rolleyes:

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I thought this was a forum where you can receive critiques.. (??) but it seems that "new members" are not so considered..:hmm:

[kotter]

I'd love to give some crits, if only I could see the image... |X|

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try this:
http://net.supereva.it/moloch666.freemail/solitudeok.jpg

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or this: http://members.xoom.virgilio.it/_XOOM/oblivionrlms/solitude.htm

sorry for the inconvenience..some free hosting do not work with all ppl :(

[honkie]

Ok! Cause i'm a new member too i'll give you some critics ;)
First of all: Looks nice though there are some things i don't like...
1. The face of that girl is too flat. i think you meant to do it so, but doesn't look that good
2. You should change the BG... Maybe one of those grunch pics or sth else "dark"
3. The dragon doesnt fit in there either, looks so pastet

If you correct these things maybe the pic expresses the mood better =)

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thank you! :) yes, the "flatness" on her face is voluntary.. I'll keep in mind your suggestions!!

[enoxa]

Hi, i also find it's a difficult place for new members :)
Nice work and original idea.
Just a few critics to improve it : texture a bit more her skin
Improve your lightning to create a special mood, something more dramatic
Add a more detailed background

Hope this will help you

enoxa

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