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ZazMan
10-23-2003, 05:12 AM
Derek Orchard has entered the ALIENWARE Challenge.

ZazMan
11-11-2003, 03:47 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1068522454_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1068522454_large.jpg)

Here is one of my concepts and Designs. I want to work them out a little more before I start to model, Give me some feed back!! thanks!

ZazMan
11-11-2003, 03:49 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1068522577_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1068522577_large.jpg)

Here is one of my concepts and Designs. I want to work them out a little more before I start to model, Give me some feed back!! thanks!

ZazMan
11-11-2003, 03:51 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1068522711_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1068522711_large.jpg)

Here is one of my concepts and Designs. I want to work them out a little more before I start to model, Give me some feed back!! thanks!

ZazMan
11-11-2003, 03:53 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1068522839_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1068522839_large.jpg)

Here is one of my concepts and Designs. I want to work them out a little more before I start to model, Give me some feed back!! thanks!

LightFreeze
11-12-2003, 06:28 AM
Hi
I like your `sentinal` type thing, if your looking for ideas how about a ring of them pointing to some central area?

ZazMan
11-14-2003, 07:31 PM
Hey Thanks for the input!!, I am still seeing what is going to work with this. :D I know that these thing take time, but i am really looking to "set things off" with this :bounce: , I am hoping not to get too over my head with this!!! :eek: in the end As long as i can pull the view in I will be sucessful.

See ya

Zaz

Borro
11-14-2003, 08:55 PM
These are some very good concepts! I can't wait to see the models!!

ZazMan
11-21-2003, 04:58 AM
:)

ZazMan
11-21-2003, 05:03 AM
Here is some of my models that I have been working on... just some ideas, I may go back and redo the concept, maybe rework the models.. just see how the time goes.

ZazMan
11-21-2003, 05:05 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1069391132_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1069391132_large.jpg)

Here is some of my models that I have been working on... just some ideas, I may go back and redo the concept, maybe rework the models.. just see how the time goes.

ZazMan
11-21-2003, 05:11 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1069391469_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1069391469_large.jpg)

Here is some of my models that I have been working on... just some ideas, I may go back and redo the concept, maybe rework the models.. just see how the time goes.

ZazMan
11-21-2003, 05:12 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1069391577_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1069391577_large.jpg)

Here is some of my models that I have been working on... just some ideas, I may go back and redo the concept, maybe rework the models.. just see how the time goes.

ZazMan
11-21-2003, 05:15 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1069391703_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1069391703_large.jpg)

Here is some of my models that I have been working on... just some ideas, I may go back and redo the concept, maybe rework the models.. just see how the time goes.

ZazMan
11-21-2003, 05:19 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1069391950_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1069391950_large.jpg)

Here is some of my models that I have been working on... just some ideas, I may go back and redo the concept, maybe rework the models.. just see how the time goes.

sorry for the messed up image :cry:

ZazMan
11-21-2003, 05:22 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1069392133_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1069392133_large.jpg)

Here is some of my models that I have been working on... just some ideas, I may go back and redo the concept, maybe rework the models.. just see how the time goes.

ZazMan
12-01-2003, 05:31 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1070256706_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1070256706_large.jpg)

I went back and thought more about what I was doing and I thought I redo some of the sketches and these are the results.

ZazMan
12-01-2003, 05:36 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1070256974_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1070256974_large.jpg)

I went back and thought more about what I was doing and I thought I redo some of the sketches and these are the results.

ZazMan
12-01-2003, 05:38 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1070257081_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1070257081_large.jpg)

I went back and thought more about what I was doing and I thought I redo some of the sketches and these are the results.

ZazMan
12-01-2003, 05:44 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1070257454_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1070257454_large.jpg)

after doing the new sketches, I started to change the models i had and expand on them. texture are just working textures!! Hope you like my efforts so far.

ZazMan
12-01-2003, 05:47 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1070257622_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1070257622_large.jpg)

after doing the new sketches, I started to change the models i had and expand on them. texture are just working textures!! Hope you like my efforts so far.

ZazMan
12-01-2003, 05:49 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1070257764_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1070257764_large.jpg)

after doing the new sketches, I started to change the models i had and expand on them. texture are just working textures!! Hope you like my efforts so far.

ZazMan
12-01-2003, 05:57 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1070258232_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1070258232_large.jpg)

after doing the new sketches, I started to change the models i had and expand on them. texture are just working textures!! Hope you like my efforts so far.

ZazMan
12-01-2003, 05:59 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1070258378_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1070258378_large.jpg)

after doing the new sketches, I started to change the models i had and expand on them. texture are just working textures!! Hope you like my efforts so far.

ZazMan
12-09-2003, 07:47 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1070956054_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1070956054_large.jpg)

continuing the modeling here are some wires

ZazMan
12-09-2003, 07:50 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1070956209_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1070956209_large.jpg)

continuing the modeling here are some wires

ZazMan
12-09-2003, 07:57 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1070956648_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1070956648_large.jpg)

continuing the modeling here are some wires

ZazMan
12-09-2003, 08:00 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1070956823_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1070956823_large.jpg)

continuing the modeling here are some wires

ZazMan
12-09-2003, 08:05 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1070957117_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1070957117_large.jpg)

continuing the modeling here are some wires

ZazMan
12-09-2003, 08:08 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1070957320_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1070957320_large.jpg)

I am starting to work on some lights here is an early idea about how i am thinking about useing my lights

ZazMan
12-25-2003, 06:21 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1072333307_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1072333307_large.jpg)

Well, here is my next offering, I still workign with the texutres, I am figuring that this, with a little more tweaking, will be my texture. I don't know if you want them on a on the model or you want to see the flat textures.

I don't know what more i can add, I figure most people don't see my work, I think i am doing a good job of following the guide line given, but I haven't got to much crits on anything i have done, since I started this.

In the end, it is just nice to be here with all on you doing something we all enjoy to do!!!

Take care,

Z-Man

Ian Jones
12-25-2003, 01:28 PM
The shapes look really interesting, the texture is fun aswell. However, it seems a bit gimmicky the way it is like the whole landscape has been painted with a single pattern... very unrealistic, it really detracts from the modelling and believablity IMHO. I'd really love to see some more elements at work in your image, such as a sky / atmosphere for starters and maybe some interesting lighting.

Another point which I'd like to make is that the hills / mountains and even the main elements in the middle there really looks like it has been stuck onto a regular vanilla groundplane. It almost looks like plasticine models layed out on a flat surface. What it needs is either some more natural variation and undulation of the main ground plane and defintely something to merge the ojbects together a bit more.

Keep going mate. Like you said, it's ultimately all about the enjoyment. Good luck!

ZazMan
12-28-2003, 05:13 AM
Hey Thanks! know I really know someone is look at mystuff!! some great tips too, I spending the time trying to find diffent things i can change, I know it need a lot of work. and the clock is ticking! Come back again!

Z-man

BClaw
01-08-2004, 06:05 AM
I don't have any tips for you, because I'm too much of an amateur :blush: but I know when I see something I like, and your image is really shaping up into something strange and wonderful! :thumbsup: Good luck in the challenge! :applause:

ZazMan
01-11-2004, 06:04 AM
Hey thanks Bclaw

if all you could think to say is that it is you like or it nice you think it great, that IS great! everyone needs some encourgment for time to time. as we all know some times we get down on ourself doing our best to create the best we can, and we might not think it match up to other people's work. sometimes just a simple pat on the back and help someone unmeasurablly. :applause: you thank you :beer: we all need to do our best and here we have people of simmular interests, you might see something that someone else hasn't. :cool: Be cool :) always free to post.

thanks again!


Z-Man

ZazMan
01-13-2004, 12:40 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1073954420_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1073954420_large.jpg)

Well, he is my lastest, I hope to upload my final image soon, there are a few more things I want to do. but I also feel I taking this as fast as I can and since there is must time left I guess that is a good thing. It has been fun read posts about other people work, I post a few myself, nice to see everyone progress on their own work over the alloted time. so if i for get to say it later it been a pleasure.

ZazMan
01-19-2004, 06:36 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1074494186_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1074494186_large.jpg)

well this one is a little to sharp, I going to do one that is just a little less define, but of luck to all

eska
01-20-2004, 06:19 AM
Good done, kind of different, but this is what I like.
Best eska:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :wavey:

ZazMan
01-20-2004, 06:22 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1074579737_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/3/563/563_1074579737_large.jpg)

Best of luck to everyone,this is my final image I am off to submit the one for judging. it been fun watch everyone show what they are doing and we all progress though this togeter! take care

Z-Man

ZazMan
01-21-2004, 07:43 AM
hey eska Sorry I didn't catch you message when i last uploading my pic, Thanks!! :beer: I really am thankful for you kind words, it alway great to know that there are people who like you work and tell you about it :D again thanks :) all the best :cool:

Z-man

ZazMan
01-24-2004, 07:07 AM
Well, I really don't know what been going on, but it sure does seem like thing have been going crazy in the forums!!! :shrug: oh well I figure thing will work out fine. I just hope i don't miss out of anything. Well the best to all it been fun, thanks for all the people who took the time to look at my stuff and those who took the time to write my a message and gave me soem very useful tips. :applause: :bowdown:

Catch ya later!

ZazMan

ZazMan
01-27-2004, 07:08 AM
Wow Voting started and ended today! I wish I knew! I don't know it too late to vote even now! oh well, better luck next time I guess

ZazMan

BClaw
01-27-2004, 07:19 AM
Who said voting was over? I just got finished voting myself, about 20 minutes ago. Anyway, doesn't it go to Alienware for final judging? The CG members are only *part* of the score. :) Good luck! :thumbsup:

ZazMan
01-28-2004, 03:15 AM
Yeah I so pose you are Right Bclaw, but I have no idea, they really didn't tell anyone who is in the contest when it was going to happen.. I guess I just didn't read the right forums oh well my bad, it was still great watching everyone work on this togeter! :)

Best of luck to you Bclaw!!! :applause:

Z-Man

ZazMan
01-30-2004, 04:58 AM
I am so confused, were we voting before? or are we voting now?
Hey I don't care anymore!! Vote for me! okay? please? I vot for you!!

;) just kidding on the whole voting thing!!!

Z-man

ZazMan
02-03-2004, 06:38 AM
Hey thanks everyone!!

I made it to 650 Views of my thread!!!

I think it is great that people are still looking at my stuff and please feel free to post here too I think to hear what you think like love or hate, i like to here it.. maybe i can make it to 700 views before the close these threads!!! :beer: again thanks it been a blast look at everyone's work :applause: I wish you all the best take care!!

ZazMan :thumbsup:



:wavey:

JamesMK
02-03-2004, 03:01 PM
Ah, OK, here's another one for your view counter!

eska
02-03-2004, 05:51 PM
Mine too.
Good lucky!

ZazMan
02-04-2004, 06:48 AM
Hey thanks :D JamesMK
Thanks to you too Eska :bowdown:

I know it silly, but I had lots of fun reading everyone stuff. I just want to keep the good times going!!!! :beer:

ZazMan
:thumbsup:

ZazMan
02-04-2004, 06:56 AM
Hey thanks to everyone!!! I'm at 736 now!!! you guys are the Best!!!:thumbsup: Too the good times!!!!


:beer:

ZazMan

ZazMan
02-12-2004, 07:05 PM
Well it been a good run, 856 views, I think that is pretty cool. and thanks to all of you coming to look at my stuff, While I wait to find out what happens with the Cg challenge, I am working on some new stuff, when it ready I'll start a WIP thread and I hope some of you will come over and give me some pointers!!!:bounce: Thanks for you time and your support!:thumbsup:

:bowdown: :bowdown:
ZazMan

ZazMan
03-06-2004, 12:24 AM
Well that is it, Congrats to the winners, best wishes to the losers Thanks for to the people who kept looking for at my thread 1323 view hits I could not ask for such support. :thumbsup: take care one and all. Keep making stuff!!!

ZazMan

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