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Alexzavr
03-18-2011, 12:33 AM
last update:
finally i'm complete everything, thanks everyone for attention for advises for everything 8-) here my final pictures and i think tomorow i will prepare small video preview from marmoset real time render program


http://imageshack.us/m/805/815/88841052.jpg
http://imageshack.us/m/194/9956/50443230.jpg
http://imageshack.us/m/190/2863/93581744.jpg
http://imageshack.us/m/687/6928/12327998.jpg
http://imageshack.us/m/703/6486/81347666.jpg









so good luck everyone! and let's start :thumbsup: I decided to make a goddess of hunting, hunting of animals, people, spirits, etc. she is from dark side like half of demon or half of animal anyway she is not a good god:twisted:. This is the first step, I draw a simple sketch in the future necessary decide what would be her face, real or diabolical and necessary add a bow, arrows, weapons, etc.

Alexzavr
03-18-2011, 08:27 PM
base mesh
http://img813.imageshack.us/img813/333/88554155.jpg

Alexzavr
03-19-2011, 02:45 PM
first touch zbrush
http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/9964/74154381.jpg

Alexzavr
03-20-2011, 01:40 AM
poor lion :rolleyes: - good coat:twisted:
http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/7100/22912499.jpg

Darkonerster
03-21-2011, 11:08 AM
Good work so far, the 3d looks pretty cool.

lorez
03-21-2011, 07:03 PM
i was keeping an eye on your work from round one. keep it up.
you are off to a fast and furious start .

skyheinrich
03-21-2011, 07:23 PM
Hey, nice start Alexzavr!

Alexzavr
03-21-2011, 09:46 PM
thanks guys, I'm just trying to make quick, because I was waiting this Dominance War almost 2 years and now I have a lot of passion to make a quick:wip: and good :cool:

Alexzavr
03-22-2011, 09:02 PM
I decided to make all details and then begin sculpt :wip:
http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/9664/44690242.jpg

Shanku
03-22-2011, 09:34 PM
Whoa~ You sculpt and model really fast! ;D
So much work done already!

Alexzavr
03-24-2011, 05:59 AM
yes a lot of work has been done and necessary to do more, we've got just one and a half months so - do not relax guys;)
small update continue to add details
http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/8100/57392272.jpg

MFTituS
03-24-2011, 08:46 PM
hey, you are rushing forward with big steps :) i like the hunting theme and the details.
just two things:
- the lion head doesn't look very functional. the heavy head is lying on her shoulder and would constrain her movement. maybe it would be an option to put it on her back or use a smaller animal?

- her details are a bit mixed up. skirt with leater straps (ancient world), some chain armor...i'm sure that you can design a better outfit with some thoughts about her life, environment, function :)
i associate hunting with liveliness, speed, dexterity, soundless.... giving her cushy materials, materials that do not make noise by walking, that melt with her environment, that are taken out of her environment can make the design more consistent and tell the viewer more about her.

just some thoughts to slow you down before you have finsihed your work next week ;)

Alexzavr
03-25-2011, 01:07 AM
So Michael, you're a good artist and I respect you :thumbsup: that's why I will explain more!
When I thought about a woman hunter, of course I thought about the character design like these....

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/7195/primerf.jpg

but then I remembered that also - she has to be a goddess
leader, or commander, someone who can lead the army of spirits, animals, demons, people-it does not matter. because she is a goddess!
and that's why she must look more massive, than the usual silent hunter in the forest(for example):rolleyes:

I decided to make a lion because he is the king of all beasts, and she killed him, and used as a coat I think it means something, decorate itself with trophies defeated enemies. and lion still not ready, believe me right now I'm not sure about his size, shape and place.
OK let's see what I will have in the final result 8-) thanks for your opinion and advice, I really will think about a lion.
and also i decide to make a pet for her, something , someone big and strong.like a rhino, or buffalo, or a diabolic wolf, a simple sketch

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/4003/petn.jpg

that's why i very hurry, alot of works - and just one and half month :buttrock:

Myers
03-25-2011, 09:15 AM
wow great and fast progress

kogen
03-25-2011, 09:48 AM
First of all let me say that I like what you've done so far. Cool details and interesting idea. But just one question: Pet's are forbidden this year in DW, aren't they?

Alexzavr
03-25-2011, 01:36 PM
yes of course we can make pets , link from rules
"Up to 12,500 tris max for everything (everything = characters, laser beams, shield effects, glows, other special effects, magical weapon, gear, steed(s), pet(s), twin(s), multiple characters, summoned monsters, personal equipment, etc)."

kogen
03-25-2011, 01:39 PM
Ahhhh cool, good to know :D Thank you. Keep on modeling, Mr. Alexzavr :D

r2y
03-25-2011, 04:48 PM
nice progress overall :) mr. Alexzavr (http://forums.cgsociety.org/member.php?u=130055)
your modeling is fast and good detail

raultabajara
03-25-2011, 08:03 PM
Good character!
You will have a lot of work to re-topology all these little things of the armor!

so, you can put more animals in the armor.
She is a god. She hunting a lot of animals!
(i like the lion, but i believe that you put more could be better)

DTRAN
03-26-2011, 06:40 AM
Wow! the sculpt progress is looking great! good luck the rest of the way!

Alexzavr
03-27-2011, 11:41 PM
small update, added some details, bow, a quiver, and working with lion :)

http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/3482/56868354.jpg

Alexzavr
03-30-2011, 02:34 AM
new update, I decided put her bow behind her back, I think in her hand she would hold a sword or a spear
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/1838/61109815.jpg

dnk
03-30-2011, 03:52 PM
Hey Man! Glad to see you.
Good luck.

ps: а чё ты в Уругвае забыл?
бананы любишь?))

Alexzavr
03-30-2011, 04:39 PM
Hey Man! Glad to see you.
Good luck.

ps: а чё ты в Уругвае забыл?
бананы любишь?))

thanks dude;)

ps да просто заебался как совразка бегать по москве,метро работа метро дом и тд. захотелось пожить спокойно,отдохнуть в тепле и всё такое ну и бананы не лишнее :)

Alexzavr
04-01-2011, 03:13 AM
Finally it's time to sculpting, my favorite part:cool: right now just legs and some muscles on the stomach and hands

http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/2770/90079365.jpg

alannalolz
04-01-2011, 04:31 AM
wow..!
the armour and accessories are phenomenal :surprised
and you've come so far from your base mesh i can can't wait to see it textured:drool:

Alexzavr
04-06-2011, 12:22 AM
well I'm still here in the challenge :) today update, still necessary a lot to do but I'm was very tired to fight with the this model -really tired:banghead:
http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/7531/54121751.jpg

so that's why I decided to switch my mind on the pet, think about pet,work with pet and relax, becouse work with pet i supose will be more easy- i hope :)
examples and a sketch for inspiration:
http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/4999/pet2s.jpg


and the first step, base mesh :
http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/7285/81299198.jpg

Alexzavr
04-08-2011, 11:31 PM
hi everyone, well small update - this is more correct base mesh for sculpting

http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/6900/44356917.jpg

Alexzavr
04-12-2011, 05:02 AM
pet process of sculpting

http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/8319/20789658.jpg

KingstonZ
04-12-2011, 03:29 PM
Alexzavr, your model looks really good so far.. and you are damn fast..! i like your idea of her having a pet... the sculpt looks sweet.

Alexzavr
04-14-2011, 02:20 AM
i think that's all with sculpting I finished! all small details i will make on texture-like skin, lather, fur, hair, etc. here you can see sizes, proportions and hair test.
and now i will begin make a retopology

http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/9216/21023514.jpg
http://img816.imageshack.us/img816/4396/27571235.jpg
http://img638.imageshack.us/img638/2567/35194281.jpg

jeryl
04-14-2011, 03:50 PM
very evil and nice! but lol i was wondering whats the breast plate for if it isnt going to cover her breasts?(can see the nipples).. haha that part was funny to me but the rest is great!

Alexzavr
04-14-2011, 05:23 PM
hahh 8-) yes this is some sexual part (pink nipples:drool:)-you think better hide them? something like this?

http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/8378/111rld.jpg

jeryl
04-16-2011, 10:51 AM
yeah lol.. i can see that even though u covered it the nipple surrounding can still be seen.. which is what u want i guess? it kinda fit her character too!

by the way i was wondering u have the rhino, the lion pad and her head, am curious is it too much for a 12k game model? i am stil new to 3d modeling hope to see how u tackle with these, good luck man will watch ur progressions!

Willer00
04-19-2011, 02:30 PM
Hey man, great sculpt nice detail all over , nice style on the pet too

Blacklion
04-19-2011, 03:51 PM
Great work
love how the shoulder pads came out
the pet is a nice touch too.

Alexzavr
04-20-2011, 12:19 AM
tthanks guys, but better if you tell me what you dislike! realy please write something bad about my model-becouse this is more important! right now my eyes are blinded becouse I work with this model is too long and perhaps i dont see something bad, strange, etc.
and update almost done with retopology, also must be a big sword- evil sword with strange shape :curious:
http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/9680/80400255.jpg
http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/2371/73430078.jpg

Velkin
04-22-2011, 04:11 AM
Nice sculpting.

Alexzavr
04-22-2011, 04:54 AM
2 Velkin (http://forums.cgsociety.org/member.php?u=427436) спасибо чювак, и давай уже разрадись на чёнибудь негативное - надоели эти бесполезные лесные отзывы, реально советов хочется по модели что плохо, что стоит улучшить на данном этапе и тд?!

already baked textures, normal and light, and now i'm begin doing the most intresting part- texturing:twisted:

http://img638.imageshack.us/img638/6559/47655868.jpghttp://img232.imageshack.us/img232/6614/53235108.jpg

Velkin
04-22-2011, 07:06 AM
2 Velkin (http://forums.cgsociety.org/member.php?u=427436) спасибо чювак, и давай уже разрадись на чёнибудь негативное - надоели эти бесполезные лесные отзывы, реально советов хочется по модели что плохо, что стоит улучшить на данном этапе и тд?!

already baked textures, normal and light, and now i'm begin doing the most intresting part- texturing:twisted:


Ну смотри.

По большому счету прицепиться не к чему. Смущаут мышци на животе. У женщин они обычно не такие выпуклые.

Не нравится как ты сделал натитьник лоупольный. Вообще никак не сделал, собираешься текстурой решать? Не советую, смотреться будет так себе, на силуете ведь не прорисуется.

Ноги птичьи тоже не нравятся. Сама по себе идея не плохая, но у птиц ноги не так устроены, особенно с пальцами накосячил. Суставы толще должны быть. Сейчас просто как шланги выглядят.

Ну и надбровные дуги по-моему великоваты несколько. Вообще стилизация в области глаз чрезмерная.

Зверюга - вообщи ни о чем. Извиняй, но по-моему она лишняя.

По английски продублировать?

chandramohansahani
04-22-2011, 05:48 PM
really nice work


Dominance War V WIP (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?f=330&t=968109&page=2)

harlequin02
04-23-2011, 07:20 PM
what i dislike ? ermmm. . . . maybe you gonna kill me but your character face is not attractive to look at. may be she look old like around 40-45 ? and that six packs it's only exist on male, yes i know the real world female also have six packs but are they interesting to see ? and for an overall look you succeed to achieve the hunter look but not god look. . . ok you can kill me now. *peace

jeryl
04-25-2011, 05:01 AM
imo i thought it looks great, goddess of hunting gives me the feel like shes a chief of the tribe or something, someone that people look up to-think of her as a living god.. i like it it looks cool..

one thing, am i wrong or is the topo on her face abit out of place? was it suppose to go round her face instead of straight down?

Alexzavr
04-26-2011, 05:20 AM
update, i began prepare some layers, some details etc. i have many many plans and just 20 days:sad: , how you think on this time deadline - dominance war can be delayed? maybe one week more moreeee ;)
and guys thanks for advices i'm really think about them!

http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/5378/90760562.jpg

roke8five
04-26-2011, 06:01 PM
Great piece mate! Excited to see more!! Cheers :)

nicedream
04-27-2011, 05:06 AM
Keep follow your work for a while. I gonna say that it's wonderful it's awesome with all great details. and you've done so fast just a few weeks but you can reach to this state.
Great stuf ! Alexzavr : D

DOMINANCEWAR V (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?f=330&t=967790)

Alexzavr
05-02-2011, 04:18 AM
hi everyone, some texture update and smile with teeth :scream:

http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/4994/66128884.jpg
http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/9399/37604847.jpg

MFTituS
05-03-2011, 01:46 PM
becomes better and better.
her legs don't look very good in this position from the side. her leg parts are all rotated in an angular position that looks very tiring to hold it like this. i would straighten her legs more - see some reference.

Alexzavr
05-03-2011, 03:40 PM
well don't worry-she is a strong woman 8-) actually of course you right, at now her pose locs strange but i hope on the final picture i will make more interesting position

roke8five
05-03-2011, 05:14 PM
Great work mate, been following this piece for a\ while and your updates are powerful!
Cant wait to see more!!
:beer:

Alexzavr
05-06-2011, 05:26 AM
better and better but still not enough, still necessary more details, more stile ......
http://img864.imageshack.us/img864/7416/43724976.jpg
http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/6870/52257186.jpg

Alexzavr
05-14-2011, 05:42 PM
well small update, texture still not ready and very simple specular map - just to show that i'm still here :-) honestly whole last week i was working with all poses and pedestal, but they still not ready

http://imageshack.us/m/31/7767/63742669.jpg
http://imageshack.us/m/709/8479/71732601.jpg

Alexzavr
05-19-2011, 04:40 AM
i think that's all with main textures, maybe i will change some textures for the final pictures but later, i think for next step this is enough - main picture will be soon 8-)
http://img804.imageshack.us/img804/3962/23672196.jpg
http://img862.imageshack.us/img862/2087/69665695.jpg
http://img861.imageshack.us/img861/4537/37775917.jpg
http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/5631/39146884.jpg

Randize
05-22-2011, 05:35 PM
can't wait for the final posed image, way to go man! very nice texture!

Alexzavr
05-23-2011, 05:11 PM
finally i'm complete everything, thanks everyone for attention for advises for everything 8-) here my final pictures and i think tomorow i will prepare small video preview from marmoset real time render program



http://imageshack.us/m/805/815/88841052.jpg
http://imageshack.us/m/194/9956/50443230.jpg
http://imageshack.us/m/190/2863/93581744.jpg
http://imageshack.us/m/687/6928/12327998.jpg
http://imageshack.us/m/703/6486/81347666.jpg

Myers
05-23-2011, 05:32 PM
great work, that winter environment really fits her :thumbsup:

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