ALIENWARE Challenge Entry: Adrian Lozano

[adr]

Hello all , i think this contest will be a memorable event. i wish you luck guys

Lets have fun , this is the important thing .

This my first sketch , it will be dificult to paint but ill do my best to make of this sketch a descent work .

http://www.denumeris.com/3d/av1_pencil.jpg

Pd Sorry about my English


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[adr]

a little update :p

http://www.denumeris.com/3d/av1_paint.jpg


working on more updates.

[adr]

Im fighting with this paint because this is my first time doing this before start with modeling and make all the stuff .

Ill explain soon my idea . I would like to finish the sketch
What you think?



http://www.denumeris.com/3d/av1_paint1.jpg

[adr]

One more update to my sketch.

My idea comes from the entrance for this world where each big "mushroom" hehe has his own enviroment with his weather .

its like a world with many alien experiments taken from other worlds . The rocks in the entrance shows a lot of signs to explain in his language what kind of experiments has this planet.

http://www.denumeris.com/3d/av1_paint2.jpg


What you think guys? . Waiting for crits and comments

Thks.

[adr]

i added some details in the big mushroom out there . And i decide to make a new sketch for my scene that i will upload on monday cause dont have scanner in this moment.


Ill apreciate some opinions and critiques .

Thanks
:)

http://www.denumeris.com/3d/big.jpg

[Kev3D]

I think I get it... so each 'mushroom' has a bubble on top with controlled experiments going on inside it.

From your concept sketches, the colours look really nice. I like the mushroom idea and those blue seaweed lookin things. However the things in the very foreground look a lot like rocks from earth... perhaps make them more blue or something. Also, perhaps a little more detail could be added to the plane where the mushrooms are... some plant-life or something.

Anyway, cool idea, keep it up! I can't wait to see the final product!

[adr]

Morlankey: thks for the advice and the coments:thumbsup: im doing right now a new sketch with this idea and ill do some tests with those rocks , and maybe dont put the rocks in the new sketch .

thks

[adr]

one more update with some basic color on the mushroom

What do you think?:)


http://www.denumeris.com/3d/big1.jpg

[incher00]

nice colors - very vivid. I completely understand how you feel about painting in the computer! I guess that's why it's called a challenge and not a contest!

So far, I like what you got. The foreground, middleground, and background are well established creating a sense of space. The only thing that is not clear to me in this regard is whether the blue across the top in your colored posts are stalagtites or sky. I'm not sure if it's part of a cave we, the viewer, are in or if it's the sky. It's difficult to determine partly because of the white space between the yellow part and the top blue part.

The most recent drawing of the mushroom helps clarify where you are going to go with those. Can't wait to see what else you got in mind! Mountains on mushrooms! that's nuts (in a goodway!) very creative!

rock on!

[adr]

thks for your coments man :beer: my new skecth is next to me but i dont have scanner right now to put my idea and all the mushrooms . ill put the sketch on monday .

Thks again , and im agree with you this is a CHALLENGE hehe

[adr]

one more update. Im looking for a nice mood for my scene . Some colors to the sky ,water and mountains on the background.

Crits are welcome thks




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http://www.denumeris.com/3d/big2.jpg

[Hellsp4wn]

You're good at coloring
Really like the way the sketch is heading, Very nice colors, vivid.
And I like the contrast of the orange mushroom and the purple ground. Very nice

Keep it up :thumbsup:

[adr]

thanks for the coments Hellspawn . im trying to do a descent work. Awesome entries here . I will update soon my sketch where you ll find all my landscape.

thks :)

[adr]

One more update with all my sketch and the composition that i ll use to make it on 3d


i will apreciate some coments and crit


Thks

http://www.denumeris.com/3d/big3.jpg

[DigitalOmega]

wow, that is very good, i want to see more! giant mushrooms! with freaky experiments on the top.. good idea! but if you want to have something very spectacular maybe u will like to have a lot more mushrooms in the scene, to make it look more detailed..

buena suerte y aqui ando para todos los comentarios ok?
suerte! y si quieres mandame un PM para que platiquemos mas a gusto ok? bye bye

[adr]

thks for the coments man , in fact , ill put more mushrooms in the landscape but need more time to paint those .

See you soon

[Designer2]

that Idea is good indeed, with that amazing colors you've chosen for the mushrooms you may end up with a gem, I recommend you play more with arranging things inside it (Sketch)...

keep on,:wavey:

[adr]

ok guys i think i completed the main concept of my world , need more details but ill put it in 3d

I will apreciate some comments and crits thanks.

:thumbsup: http://www.denumeris.com/3d/big4.jpg

[adr]

Making some shader tests for the rocks in the foreground . ill put more tests with differents lights to match the mood of my scene


http://www.denumeris.com/3d/rock.jpg

[RKurczewski]

Now I see that I am not the only muschroom guy here ;) Great idea and briliant shader. It's 3d max I presume ?

[Designer2]

Keep going man this will have a unique look i guess, the shader is so nice...

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[adr]

thks man i would like to have more time to make updates faster .

ill try to update today., Thanks for the comment

[adr]

ok, im making the foreground now and im starting with the rocks in the front . I uploaded one image with the compositing with some light to match the mood of my scene . i think is a good start but ill keep doing tests and adding more details to the rocks. Ill put my texture in the next update .

What you think?

:)

http://www.denumeris.com/3d/AV1.jpg

[RKurczewski]

As to the rock on the left - contrast is so high that it is hardly visible. On the right in landscape image however it looks way better. Your light creates so sharp contrasts that I'd be affraid it will wash away most of the textures.

[adr]

thks _Rk_ im agree with you . ill put some updates later with some shader tests and see how the texture match with my scene

Thks for your comments


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[adr]

One more update with textures.

Coments and critics are welcome . Thanks :thumbsup:

http://www.denumeris.com/3d/av2_ok.jpg

[adr]

Sorry!!!

http://www.denumeris.com/3d/Av2_ok.jpg

[shamyl]

Remaining very well the colors, the textures etc.
But the mushroom from the beginning seems to me that it falls it seems to me that the trunk not in the way and it sees this one strange in the perspective for the rest
EXELENTE:thumbsup:

[adr]

thanks shamyl, i wiil have special care on the perspective and maybe i wiil change the orientation of those big mushroom , ill put a lot of them the scene. :beer:

Gracias

[adr]

Some updates to the foreground and those buildings along the montains .

I will apreciate some coments and critics

thks

http://www.denumeris.com/3d/av2c.jpg

[Gobbledoc]

No crits here, great modeling and surfacing... keep going :beer:

[adr]

thanks for your kind words dude . i will do it :beer:

[adr]

Hi guys !!!

Just an update to my entrie:

Camera : i moved the camera a little bit to see more terrain in the foreground of my world and work on the details of the branches.

Light : im not working in the light right now but i think this is a basic set for this part of the image.

Texture :Im happy with the results of my last test with the texture on the rocks maybe some tweaks and done.

Modeling : More details are missing right now in this update but im working on to upload some images soon.


I will apreciate some comments , ideas and crits to add some details in the foreground.

Thanks


http://www.denumeris.com/3d/av3.jpg :wavey:

[BernardoDelgado]

wow me encanta el sader q le has hecho al suelo en realidad felicidades :applause: el modeloado tambien va muy bien sigue asi compa y esperemos ver mas renders :beer:

[adr]

thanks for your comments compa ill keep going and im waiting for your updates dudes :beer:

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