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Self-Designer
10-21-2003, 02:59 PM
Hello

Here are 3 paints i've done with painter, some of them are not new, just want to hear what you think, even though i might not change them...

http://sv3.3dbuzz.com/Upload/i81962bird.jpg
http://sv3.3dbuzz.com/Upload/i81962oldman.jpg
http://sv3.3dbuzz.com/Upload/i81962smilygirl.jpg

Thanks 3dbuzz :beer:
Self-Designer
10-21-2003, 08:32 PM
Why is it that no one replies? :hmm:

Can you see the pictures?
Do my links or copy&paste suggestions work?

Anybody...
kwshipman
10-21-2003, 11:41 PM
I can see the bird, but not the other two, and copy and pasting does not work:shrug:

oh and I like the texturing on the bird.:thumbsup:
soulhill
10-22-2003, 02:16 AM
The bird is a little formless and the light and shadow does little to help. The tail feathers seem heavy when you would expect them to be light. The ball and chain isn't exactly a subtle message on a bird, is it?

The old man has been replaced with a hosting graphic.

The shadowing on the girl is dark and muddy. The fact that her eyes are black seems like it is meant to make some point, but I don't know what it is. Her smile pulling right up to her gums it a bit off as well.

Sorry this isn't a more positive critique.
Self-Designer
10-22-2003, 10:22 AM
10x, I wish i had more replies... :shrug:

Anyway, the picture with the bird was drawn sometime when i had a feeling of chained to a lot of work - and not very interesting one... but that's the past.

The girl has no meaning. I've tried to draw a girl and she seemed abit evil or atleast just not nice, so i decided to use a pic i have of an hippie girl as a smile-reference. Her eyes looked like that because they were closed from loughing - ppl do it when they lough out loud :)

Anyway, I have an acount in 3dbuzz, i'll move some pics there to redrival and those pics to 3dbuzz...
Self-Designer
10-23-2003, 07:44 PM
i'm not happy :annoyed:

2 replies only? what does a picture need to have to get replies??

I learn nothing from that in one hand and in the other, i can't even know if they'r fine... i guess they'r just "ah... ok!... bye..." :hmm:
starqueen
10-23-2003, 08:30 PM
the bird looks like it has a shiny appearance. i like the ball and chain though, its cute

the old man is a neat idea but i think needs more time before being brought to attention, would you consider building more color, line, definition, scene, background, etc?

the picture of the girl is very scary, lol i cant look at her, sorry - i think its the oddly bright hair color with the :D grin, sorry man.
Self-Designer
10-23-2003, 08:39 PM
Well, i wanted to do the old man rough, but 10x anyway

and the girl is scary?? :surprised i always thought she's kinda cute :) she looks like giggling
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