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Frenkie
10-20-2003, 01:30 AM
Hi everyone!
This is my last work,but my 1st thread in this arena!
Thats my first serious project,an audi TT.The modell was made in Max5 and rendered with Brazil with HDRi maps...

The main pic:
http://www.freeweb.hu/frenx/clear.jpg

And an other test render:
http://www.freeweb.hu/frenx/gold.jpg

please,write me your crits about my model!

FRen]{|e.

mwkmn
10-20-2003, 02:50 AM
So you're claiming these two red crosses to be an Audi TT :shame:
Just joking...
Fix up your links!

sixthe45
10-20-2003, 07:44 AM
Nice looking model .

Used too much invisible material. :twisted:

Youth
10-20-2003, 09:14 AM
Frenkie!!!

Az a baj hogy az UW-s oldalt nem látják sokan amerikában meg főleg, szóval töltsd fel őket egy FREEWEV-es szerverre különben jönnek a "nem látom a képed" levelek :)

Szóval külföldről vagy a Design21-es linkek jók vagy a Render.hu-s vagy a Freewebes...

Amúgy még hányszor mondjam hogy jó a kocsid?? :)
Szerintem az én bmw-m közelébe nem ér a tiednak :(

Bye

Frenkie
10-20-2003, 11:06 AM
Sorry boys,do not see me as a lamer
here comes the update...



... can you see now?

AttilaD
10-20-2003, 11:37 AM
no

Youth
10-20-2003, 11:49 AM
A Free.x3 is rossz mondtam hogy Magyarországon 3 server van ami jó:

render.hu
freeweb.hu
design21.hu

OK??
keress meg icq-n ha gondod van...

Frenkie
10-20-2003, 11:54 AM
na most freewebessel jónak kell lennie...

sorry guys,now it MUST be OK.plz...

Youth
10-20-2003, 01:11 PM
Now, the links are good!

C: the first picture is so real, i love :) but the second... hmm... :shrug:

Great work!!!!! :applause:

AttilaD
10-20-2003, 01:32 PM
i like it :applause:
nagyon szép

Frenkie
10-20-2003, 02:48 PM
Originally posted by Youth
Now, the links are good!

C: the first picture is so real, i love :) but the second... hmm... :shrug:

Great work!!!!! :applause:

köszi youth tesó, mint láthatod a 2. kép az csak egy test render:)

mwkmn
10-20-2003, 08:05 PM
Hehe, I can finally see the image...;)
It looks very clean and well modeled. No crits really. The only problem is that this car was modeled over and over and over and over by many people, that its greatness does not shine...
But hey, good job! :beer:

Frenkie
10-20-2003, 08:16 PM
Originally posted by mwkmn
Hehe, I can finally see the image...;)
It looks very clean and well modeled. No crits really. The only problem is that this car was modeled over and over and over and over by many people, that its greatness does not shine...
But hey, good job! :beer:

You are right,but hey,thanx a lot pal!

RmachucaA
10-20-2003, 11:59 PM
the wheels look way to small, and if the real rims where like that, they would get scratched all the time, they dont stick out like in your model. Also make sure the gaps of the panels are equidistant, some of them look crooked. And separate the hood, in your model the front part is one piece with the hood, change that and it will look much better.

Good start, and superb render.

cg-freak
10-21-2003, 01:04 AM
MMM, love this car, do you sell them in black too?

Grtzzz...

CG-Freak

-=[RoX]=-
10-21-2003, 06:37 AM
it looks fantastic.
an reallistic, too.
i like it
:applause:


greets
RoX

Aldaryn
10-21-2003, 05:13 PM
Hi!

Its cool to see you finally post some of your fine work here!

Know, that I've said everything earlier about the first one.... So, just wanted to welcome you among the Galery posters!


By the way, second (test) render looks wierd. And where are the other HDRI environment setups you've promised to do?

- A.

Napa!m
10-23-2003, 06:10 PM
Awesome dude! :)

hali! próbáld meg valami scene-be illeszteni meg picit tuningolni, a cgtalkosok erre nagyon vevők! :)

Conanart
10-23-2003, 07:02 PM
Nice job! ;)

The gaps between the panels around the door and the door in the second image look rather uneven.

G

cpiboontum
10-24-2003, 12:19 AM
Hey nice work!!! Like the Audi TT. Great rendering with HRDI. Not to be picking but I notice some in-continuity in the lower intake manifold. All the fillet edges around the open in-take manifold has some extruded or pulled edges. These fillet edges needs to be flushed with the curvature of the manifold molding.

Great work!!!

Cheers - Jay

Frenkie
10-25-2003, 01:06 PM
thanx guys all the c&c!
best regards: Frenkie.

geoffb
11-05-2003, 01:43 PM
Great job on modeling! Its very easy to mess up especially for newbies and to have uneven panels and then they put the HDRi in their renders and it stands out like a whore in church. Yours are completely smooth. Very realistic. Good job.

Regards,
Geoff

RIBAJA
11-05-2003, 04:45 PM
Hi Frankie,
Great work, great render!
I will like to know how have you used the HDR map in Brazil. If you have used Hdr map in spot light or in reflect map... ecc. ecc....
THX.

Sorry for mybad english.

Ribaja

mwkmn
11-05-2003, 04:52 PM
RIBAJA, this tutorial may help you...

http://www.splutterfish.com/gabry_hdri_tut_tmp/

machobug
11-05-2003, 05:05 PM
your model is cool~ :applause:

gpepper
11-06-2003, 02:06 PM
the rims are strange

Agent 47
11-07-2003, 09:34 PM
You could not have chosen a cooler car. Do you have any pix of the interior? how about the hex nuts around the gas cap?

:beer:

Frenkie
11-07-2003, 10:54 PM
the interior ist just really schematic modelled,just for the shapes...
the gas cap is not modelled.

mentholx
11-08-2003, 05:37 PM
it's nice ,
good modeling and rendering.
post more image.:beer:

bobba
11-08-2003, 10:15 PM
Give us a wireframe, would you?

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