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01-21-2011, 11:57 PM
i did this a long time ago and im considering reworking it. I want to make the action stonger any pointer would be greatly appreciated :)

02-11-2011, 02:00 PM
I like the second half, the punch and your name appearing. I think maybe lose the waving arms at the beginning. It doesn't flow into the punch very well. Just my thoughts anyway :D

02-11-2011, 05:59 PM
thanks a tone! any suggestions on what to do instead?

02-12-2011, 01:45 AM
The most important part behind any animation is story. (Maybe even behind any drawing of a figure) Come up with a story instead of random movements, some logical combination of poses to capture interest, even if it is only a few seconds long. The timing looks good though!

02-13-2011, 01:52 AM
very good advice im considering changing the character all together, thanks for the input :)

02-14-2011, 09:32 AM
You could study some manga poses, if that's the style your going for? Once you have an idea of the action you could act out the moves in front of a mirror or even better a video camera.

I've only just started learning animation properly myself. A very good book that everybody recommends is 'The Animators Survival Kit - Richard Williams' There's a link here to the website The Animator's Survival Kit (http://www.theanimatorssurvivalkit.com/) It's helped me to understand animation a lot .

Hope this helps :)

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