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[Thorse]
12-14-2001, 01:53 PM
I made this image with LW 7 and some post production with photoshop... I want for critics and tips

[url]http://www.3debug.com/final.jpg[url]

Thanks

[Thorse]
12-14-2001, 02:13 PM
this is a test to put the image

http://www.3debug.com/final.jpg

chrom
12-14-2001, 03:30 PM
like it
looks like old photo, but where is the caustics?

make them

cheers
.chrom

and use the DOF in LW or xdof plugin, don't smudge the background in photoshop

frank
12-14-2001, 03:46 PM
That's cool. I like the old photo treatment your gave to the picture.

But I think that the shape of the upper part is a bit weird. It's not round enough. If you correct it, the reflections are going to look a lot more natural. The base of the glass could be a bit bigger.

The wood texture looks to small. It makes the glass appear as huge.

And composition wise, I think the glass is to close to the side of the pictures. The dark/empty area on the right doesn't balance with all the details on the left.

-F

[Thorse]
12-15-2001, 12:01 AM
Hi chrom for your comments...

O didnīt use any plugin for DoF and didinīt use the LW DoF, it is only a post production with photoshop...

:P

I visit you website... WOW !!!! Awesome !!! Very nice work !

:)

I will make caustics to my image...

thanks for your comments

:D

Kadde
12-15-2001, 12:29 AM
Beautifull !
it created an atmosphere.

i liked the glowing reflections.
but the edges of the glass could be stronger.
a tiny white line contouring the shape and the opening.

try studying some photo references and renaissence paintings.
(it helped me a lot)

[Thorse]
12-15-2001, 09:07 AM
Thanks for your comments !

Kadde, Yes!! I will find some photos to do an a better image...


:D

frank, thanks for your comments too

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