environement: Cuba house

[metaGauge:Zero]

looks awesome!!! i really like the wall. my only suggestion would be to dirty up the cobblestone sidewalk a little. great work :thumbsup:

[Smurf Taco]

I agree with the cobblestone, it also seems a bit uniform.

Also, the window shouldn't fit the mishapen hole in the wall, there should be gaps where the wall isn't straight, you know?

But I love the scene overall, great work!:applause:

[Lautreamont]

congratulations, great work.

My only crit, the colors are a little washed out so the render looks cartoonish.

but modeling is great, i dont see any mistake. congrats again.

[lo_volt]

Yeah, the colours do seem too bright but I like how the edges & lines of the walls & windows appear buckeled & worn.

http://mysite.freeserve.com/lo_volt

[Rivendale]

The wall looks a little cheesy, if you know what I mean.:p

Nice image!

[aQu]

Great work! :beer:

[chiari]

Thanks alot for the comments.

http://perso.wanadoo.fr/julien.chiari/images2/cuba2.jpg

I dirty a little the cobblestone and I desaturate the color of the wall.

[Abraham]

Modelling is excellent, I find the colors a little too saturated but it's still a very nice work :)

[chiari]

HI!

http://perso.wanadoo.fr/julien.chiari/images2/cuba3.jpg

I desaturate a little more the colors and add somes details.

[Abraham]

I prefer it so, with the sun of Cuba paint tends to desaturate a lot :) The electric cable is a nice touch too :)

[chiari]

HI!

http://perso.wanadoo.fr/julien.chiari/images2/cuba4.jpg

I add somes details.

[chiari]

http://perso.wanadoo.fr/julien.chiari/images2/cuba6.jpg

I change somes details and the texture of the pavement.
The comments are welcome!!!

[-=[RoX]=-]

great work
love it.


greets
RoX

[chiari]

http://perso.wanadoo.fr/julien.chiari/images2/cuba7.jpg

I put a displacement texture at the pavement and I had some details.
The comments are welcome!!!

[Abraham]

Very nice work, getting better and better :)

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