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PinkyandBrain
12-20-2010, 01:10 PM
Hey guys, just wanted to share my first Hand model ever and ask for some crits'n'comments!

http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_Emwbctng1t4/TQ9h5ouxWkI/AAAAAAAAAEc/BHR8-LQafbg/s1600/Hand_Turntable.jpg

DBentley
12-20-2010, 07:46 PM
From what I can see, that looks really solid for a first hand. I might see a couple things that could be improved on, but it's hard to tell from that one render.

If you could do up a couple more renders from different angles, I might be able to give a bit more of a critique.

Good work otherwise though!

PinkyandBrain
12-21-2010, 08:07 AM
Hey thanks for your Comment so far, i made a some more renders.
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_Emwbctng1t4/TRBuIs_nLpI/AAAAAAAAAEk/qHgcgdgjs4c/s1600/Hand_Turntable_3.jpg
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_Emwbctng1t4/TRBuHN92FsI/AAAAAAAAAEg/33YaDUVOVoo/s1600/Hand_Turntable_2.jpg

ezekiel66
12-21-2010, 10:19 AM
For a first hand model its pretty good. A few things you could improve:

- volume of the hand is not quite right. Flesh out the palm of the hand some more. Look at your own hand from the side. Its more or less shaped like a wedge (seen from the wrist to the finger tips). The part of your hand where it would join the wrist is too flat.

- the back of the hand also needs improvement, especially the knuckle area. It's too flat and undefined.

- the fingernails are a bit too large and flat.

It's all minor stuff though that can be fixed quickly. Well done altogether!

Maybe you can post a wireframe also so we can have a look at the topology.

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