character: first WIP orc

[houston3000]

For only beginning this is great I do have some critiques though, for one his jaw seems Extremley square and seems to go back and out too far. Also, his eyes look like very simple, I don't know if you have Photoshop but if so than this eye map tutorial is excellent (http://my.en.com/~kimo/eyemap-tut.html).

His body looks pretty good except for his back which is kinda flat and squashed looking. I like his textures actually and can't wait to see what he turns into. Keep updating :)

[Windmill]

Nice orc.. reminds me of the warcraft ones.. The chest area is bugging me.. looks a tiny bit geometric to me.

[gag]

thanks for your comments!!!!!

for the eyes' texture i know that it's too simple, but that was the skin i want to test (because for the eyes there's a lot of tutorials, and thanks for yours :D)

for the whole texture and other motifications i'll do it next month i think because my machine don't support this model (too heavy) and i'll change the shoes too and i'll surely make some clothes (yes! winter arrives he will be cold :lol:)

so next update later (i'm sorry :()

oh! other precisions i've done these model only with imagination, and if it seems like warcraft's orc i think that is just because orc's design i got in my head is the blizzard's one (even if i don't play)

[seb4d]

hi gag !

I'll answer in english.

For a first model I think it's quite good though a bit geometric as Windmill said.
The chest and abdomen are too flat.

The skinning looks good.

Can you show wireframes of the model please ?

[gag]

hey!!! aries' power!! :D:D:D

ok i'll try to show some wires but as i say before i can't work on this model with my actually computer (i change next month) and 3DSMAX is on an another compurter that internet (i know it's strange :D)

i'll post a wire as soon as possible

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