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SketchPad
10-12-2003, 08:15 AM
http://www.hamsterking.com/3dmaxer/skin3.jpg
Software: 3Dstudio Max 4.26

Wires:

http://www.hamsterking.com/3dmaxer/skinwire1.jpg
The image has been updated.

Feel free to comment on modelling, flaws, suggestions - anything really...!
And don't be afraid that I'll be hurt! Just throw it at me - it's the only way to learn.

/Tommy
aka SketchPad

slaughters
10-12-2003, 08:01 PM
The lips (top of bottom and bottom of top) pull in too far.

The mouth area projects out a little too far as well. It resembles an animals muzzel right now.

SketchPad
10-12-2003, 08:33 PM
Yes, you are right!

Thanks! It'll be corrected with the next update.

More? Anyone?

SketchPad
10-13-2003, 05:26 PM
Updated:

http://www.hamsterking.com/3dmaxer/skin6.jpg

Subtle changes, chan you notice? Wich one would you prefer? The first or the second one?

Comment's on modelling anyone?

Thanks for your time,
/Tommy

SketchPad
10-25-2003, 05:20 AM
http://www.hamsterking.com/3dmaxer/skin7hair3.jpg

Ok, that one was ugly. check the next post.

SketchPad
10-28-2003, 05:05 AM
http://www.hamsterking.com/3dmaxer/skin7hair.jpg

Krisc
10-31-2003, 05:01 AM
Her skin is looking too realistic almost. If you are going for a doll look, dolls do not have pores or many of the imperfection we real humans have. All they have is extra plastic lines where the mold was.

SketchPad
10-31-2003, 08:41 PM
Thank you for your input,

The reason I made the "skin" like that is to clone the porcelain skin of a typical collectors -porcelain- doll.

/SketchPad

Krisc
10-31-2003, 10:52 PM
Oh. I guess I should of asked what kind of doll she was. Sorry hehe

SketchPad
11-01-2003, 01:13 AM
Nothing to be sorry about - you did what I wanted - posted your opinion, and belive me - it's important to me!

Thanks again! :)

/Tommy

nineinchneil
11-03-2003, 04:49 AM
for a doll, she has a lot of pinches in her skin. the bags under her eyes are a little too much for a doll. or even a young girl of her age, for that matter. the bridge of her nose is also pinched to much. try and broaden that up. also, there's something wierd where her eyes connect to her nose; it looks like a little flab of skin. tighten that up. her eyelashes and eyebrows could use more hair.

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