female anatomy study

[diazgl]

1st, i'm suprised why no-one has made a reply. Second, great job. Only crit I have is that there's some funny stuff going on her big foot toe, and that if you hide the chest, she looks a bit like a "HE". But still, a very beautiful model.

[Tim Deneau]

Very impressive!

The crease for the big toe does look a little too deep, I only noticed though since diazgl mentioned it and I had to look hard. Can we get a shot of her back?

[Joebount]

The hips are to tight. Her brest shoudln't look like that in this position (no deformation here : the fat in her chest move according the shoulder movement : the left one should be higher and a bit flater). The arms and the shoulder are too thin.

Exept that, good work

Oh yeah, something else : Bigger boobs ! hum hum hum ... ok, I prefer bigger boobs. Go Pam, GO !!! :bounce: :bounce:

Sorry guys, I'm really tired

[xynaria]

The whole area around the neck and shoulders looks too thin and unresolved to me and as Joebount says trhe hips look a bit tight. Any chance of somew renders from other views (back/side)? That said the rest bar the toe seems to be falling into place pretty well :)

[wedge]

WHATEVER YOU DO.... DO NOT add bigger boobs like Joebount said... it would "stupify" this currently excellent model.

[Wiro]

Hehe damn I must have overlooked this thread. Really nice model that! I like the anatomy and proportions alot. I think Joebount was just joking but yeah, keep the breastsize as it is, I'm soooo tired of bombtitted amazons and those look just fine ;)

He's got a good point though, the left one (her left) should sag down a bit since it's at an angle to gravity.

But overall it's very very nice! I can't think of anything to nitpick on :)

Wiro

[Error323]

Very very nicely done :buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock:

where the hell are your starts?!!!! :bounce: :bounce:

[el diablo]

the ears sit way to far back on the head. Assuming the character was rigged for the pose; the bicep roll(arm wrestling movement) is on the shoulder bone and needs to be on an intermediate bone between the shoulder and elbow. the falloff needs to happen along the bicep. I usually call this the bicep bone. Your deformation looks extremely unnatural and uncomfortable. nice render though. just a few tweaks then I would say you are done....el diablo

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[Zulu]

Hello,

my name is Zulu :wavey: and I'm new in here. I don't have a real idea how to model a Pic like this one, so if you can explain to me how to get this results or how you did this piece of work would be very nice :)

btw i work with Maya;)

:cool:THX Zulu:cool:

[erikals]

:) Beautiful.

Are her arms to small?
Yepp, that toe needs a small fix.

:airguitar
Erik

[nick]

Very impressive modelling, accurate and detailed. The lighting works very well to show off the contours. Great work

[spunkman]

this one is great!
impressive



:applause:

[gametech]

Respect !
nice use of light and shader
succes !

[Joril]

I'm soooo tired of bombtitted amazons and those look just fine
Same here.
This is actually quite funny that you mention this.
Get ready for a <<<big shock>>>.

Amazons cut their right breast off so they could handle a bow better.

So to anyone who ever modeled one of them frale, thin, busty amazons :shame:

My comment on this model is that it looks a bit like a male body (even the head), she needs wider hips and thinner waste, the breasts should go a little higher too.
The shoulders are to broad, a front view would show us more.

Maybe a similar pose to help you out.
http://www.fineart.sk/page108.gif

[J.Peckham]

this is awesome, way better than i could do. but the deltoids look a bit small to be that developed. also, the area above the gluteus medius usually has a shelf of some fat resting on it-which gives the hips that elongated look and a crease when folded, like in the pose you have. i hope i'm not being too picky :) another thing is the breast on the left (not sure about the right) is way too low. it should hang off the pectoral and into the armpit. not the upper abdominal they are also usually more wide than long instead of round.like i said you are way better than me i just want to see this be as good as it could be!!

[Rob3D31]

Where are your stars???

Is that soemthing we vote on?

[flamedevil]

Beautiful model , congratulation .
but i find the hand slightly little .

[nilbogarb]

Thank you for all the comments!

I missed that silly toe crease, thanks for pointing it out. I'm happy with the overall breast size and won’t be making them any larger, I’m not a fan of the silly huge variety. As far as their placement I did take that into account but it sounds like I need to move them a bit more to make up for the pose. The hips are pretty tight but you are also seeing them from an angle, not sure how much wider I’d want to make them, from a front perspective they don’t look too bad. I'll see about pulling the shoulders in, I agree they may be a bit too broad.

el diablo: do you have some reference to illustrate what you are taking about? Or perhaps you could do a quick paint over? I would like to get the bicep position right, and am struggling with its connections.

I'm working on rigging and texturing her for an animation project I'll post another render as I get things done.

I have some older work on my site if you would like to take a look:
www.cardboardboxstudios.com (http://www.cardboardboxstudios.com)

As far as the star thing, I don't know how that works, wouldn't mind some though :p

Thanks again,

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