CGTalk - Plane : Saab Tunnan

Najd

10-10-2003, 08:38 AM

Hi everybody, been working on this lately for a schoolwork, had to do the saab tunnan plane. I know, it's kinda ugly, like a fish with wings :).
So I post it here to have good advices please :)

max 5, finalrender

here are the pics :
http://kureks.free.fr/avion/tunnan00.jpg

http://kureks.free.fr/avion/tunnan.jpg

thx.

Johnny_Cannuck

10-10-2003, 08:55 AM

It looks good but you need to add more detail if you want it to look photoreal. Work on your lighting at least - all of your renders look like the plane is a toy! Keep working! :)

gmask

10-10-2003, 09:02 AM

Originally posted by Najd
http://kureks.free.fr/avion/tunnan.jpg

This DOF makes the plane look likes is miniature .. the background would not normally would that blurry with an object at this scale.

Sceme

10-10-2003, 10:27 AM

...but i like the toy look :P nice little plane u have there :)

yasuragi

10-10-2003, 10:33 AM

That’s great Najd, as a member of the great country in the north (Sweden) this pictures bring tears to my eyes – well almost at least! :-) I like the model but wouldn’t it be better if you gave it the original texture and also put a dude in there because it won’t fly by it self or will it?

How I would like it to be textured:
http://www.flygplan.info/images/saab_tunnan.jpg

Rei Ayanami

10-10-2003, 02:37 PM

its a very good start, but there are a few things i think are off:
the end of the body needs to look thinner, it may allready be (can we get a wire?) but the texturing + lighting makes it quite blunt.
The exaust of the engine is a lot smaller on yours, (esp from a tech POV) than on the photo, its gota provide a large ammount of thrust to get that moving, and the size of that hole is too small. Also the part above it should be longer.

Can you post wires (heh, there i go again) and the blueprints?

gmask

10-10-2003, 05:27 PM

Originally posted by Sceme
...but i like the toy look :P nice little plane u have there :)

Yeah I just don't think that is what he intended

_The_Paladin_

10-10-2003, 07:30 PM

So rocking, incredible, ssssoooo good

houston3000

10-11-2003, 03:48 AM

well.... I really do like the model and I think that the textures are great, but, like others said, it is not photorealistic

The depth of field seems off as all the buildings are blurred I think maybe u should try compositing against a sky background in the air as opposed to on a ground

Great Work so far though :)

JayMan2889

10-11-2003, 04:24 AM

good start, texture it a little bit more, more rugged, or dirty maybe

Najd

10-11-2003, 12:12 PM

Thx for the comments !
Here's an update, may be the last.
worked on the lightning to give a cloudy day ambiace, with high contrast.
Yasuragi : the second plane has the original textures ;).

http://kureks.free.fr/avion/tunnan2.jpg

hope you like it

yasuragi

10-11-2003, 03:48 PM

nice, but remeber to place a dude in there! your work is really great!

munkY

10-12-2003, 01:11 AM

oh i really love this swedish aircraft
keep up the work
i´d love to see a render with the swedish textures on it

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