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madmac3d
10-09-2003, 01:49 AM
Feel free to rip away.... and suggest improvements/corrections.... it needs it!

The topology needs a bit more work.... and I'm not really happy with the mouth and the nose at the moment....

The lighting and textures are temporary....

Modelled in max.

http://www.patrickmacdonald.plus.com/posts/75.jpg

and some more views and wires...

http://www.patrickmacdonald.plus.com/posts/76.jpg

http://www.patrickmacdonald.plus.com/posts/73.jpg

http://www.patrickmacdonald.plus.com/posts/77-wire.jpg

and the latest model, next to the model from a few days ago... just to show you what I progressed from!
http://www.patrickmacdonald.plus.com/posts/74.jpg
Drakaran
10-09-2003, 04:38 AM
Originally posted by madmac3d
Feel free to rip away.... and suggest improvements/corrections.... it needs it!

The topology needs a bit more work.... and I'm not really happy with the mouth and the nose at the moment....

...


Well, it's a little hard to tell cause that clay/brick texture is a little distracting. The forehead and the mouth area are both a little flat. Also, you might wanna lift the brows a little, they are kinda squashing the eyes and looks like he could barely open his eyes. You might also post a front and side of the meshes... that could be part of where the problem is coming from. You might also consider adjusting the forehead and mouth areas from top and bottom views. I know it's not the most "comfortable" postion to model in, but that helps me with roundness a LOT. Good work.
madmac3d
10-09-2003, 09:42 AM
Thanks for the suggestions... I'll give them a go...

btw.. I did post some wireframes...

wireframe (http://www.patrickmacdonald.plus.com/posts/77-wire.jpg)

Cheers!
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