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richd
10-08-2003, 05:42 AM
now i need a fresh set of crits or coms.
i started working on the legs tell me if theres anything wrong as well as rest of the model. thnks
im not working on the hands and feet yet so leave them out.


http://www.klov.com/image_upload/1065777036.work.jpg
Windmill
10-08-2003, 07:35 AM
Can't see dude :(
Electrofirma
10-08-2003, 03:16 PM
The calves and lower legs are way too thin.

The hips are too wide. If you look at images of women bodybuilders you'll find that their hips and glutes are actually very narrow.

Keep it up.
Electrofirma
10-09-2003, 06:05 AM
Good reference images here... Steel Butterflys (http://plaza20.mbn.or.jp/~stlbtrflys/)

Make sure and check the gallery links toward the bottom.
richd
10-10-2003, 01:22 PM
electro- thanks, just what i needed.

check the update of the pic on top, if it works, i toned her muscles down a bit.

post your opinions.

thanks
Electrofirma
10-10-2003, 02:45 PM
That is much better.

I still think the neck and lower legs are too thin, and she needs a belly button.
Dhin
10-10-2003, 03:45 PM
The breasts don't look right. They should hang more from the middle of each pectoral, instend of the upper center of teh chest. (did that make sence?) Plus the line underneather them looks strange. I also agree with ElectroFirma on the legs.
Electrofirma
10-11-2003, 07:31 AM
Dhin, no the breasts don't look right, but I was giving richd the benifit of the doubt.

In this image it is kind of tough to tell, because the bikini covers here breasts, but I look at the muscles between her breasts and it obvious that she isn't built like any girl I've ever known. The breasts themselves may be wrong, but I think he has the space between them very close.

Linked to speed loading (http://plaza20.mbn.or.jp/~stlbtrflys/Graphics/Kanda%20Tomoko/M-BF02.jpg)

EDIT: Also keep in mind that these girls have like negative body fat. Any actual breasts they have are very small, perched out on enormous pecs.
gmask
10-11-2003, 07:35 AM
The breasts are definately off... The forearms and the taper of the legs is odd as well.
richd
10-12-2003, 03:02 AM
yeah you guys are correct that the breast are off but ill be covering them so i havn't paid too much attention to them.

i'll also try and correct some things you guys suggested. thanks

here are shots of the hands. post up

http://www.klov.com/image_upload/1065919375.work.jpg
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