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Woodman81
10-28-2010, 05:14 PM
Please critique, it makes us all better!
Brutally honest is better than sugar coating.

http://www.vimeo.com/16041400

Kev3D
10-29-2010, 12:15 AM
Very nice work there, cool 3D motion graphics style. Well cut together.

Woodman81
10-29-2010, 01:29 PM
Thanks for the comments.
I'm most interested in how viewers take the ending. Was it too short or did it leave the right amount of anticipation?
I've thought about adding just a 1/2sec clip or two showing a bit more detail of the creature at the end. Or even in mid jump towards the screen as it cuts out?

SciFiFunk
11-01-2010, 02:15 PM
Very professional.

Good quality rendering, excellent type faces, use of colour.

Like the ink splat over the cube.

sophiewei
11-01-2010, 03:58 PM
great job!
and as you said, 1~2sec clip or two at the end will be better!

Woodman81
11-01-2010, 07:59 PM
Thanks for the comments. I think slight modifications to the end will be coming soon.

Woodman81
11-11-2010, 05:53 PM
Scratch that! I think a story for a sequal is brewing!
Here's a preview...

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