CGTalk - Scene: Smokey the turtle's Postal-dilemma. Wip-1.

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SketchPad

10-07-2003, 01:10 AM

Hi there. I'm building a scene for "Smokey the Turtle":

http://www.hamsterking.com/3dmaxer/smokeyscene3d.jpg

(*Edit* Picture translated to link to save bandwidth - look further down for the latest image!)

This is the very first wip (for the scene), and I've mainly concentrated on staging & scenery & composition,
of course there will be textures and perhaps more detail depending on if it doesn't steal attention from the character's
dilemma.

I'd much appreciate your advice, you are free to ramble about what you'd like to see in this picture
what makes the message clear? are there things here that are horribly wrong?
More detail? Where? Any input & suggestions are GREATLY appreciated,

In advance - thanks for your time.

/SketchPad

Joss

10-07-2003, 03:25 AM

I like the color scheme you have going. It gives your Smokey the Turtle character good contrast.

so what's he/she going to be doing? trying to get that letter up there in the tall mailbox? looks funny as is.

SketchPad

10-07-2003, 05:56 AM

Thanks Joss!

Here's an update:

http://www.hamsterking.com/3dmaxer/smokeyscene3d2.jpg

I'm far from finish, but ALL of your input is much appreciated (and needed).

/SketchPad

*Edit* inline image removed to save your bandwith.

SketchPad

10-11-2003, 02:24 PM

Gee....don't you all post at the same time now do you hear?

Oh well, here's another update:

http://www.hamsterking.com/3dmaxer/smokeyscene3d4.jpg

More detail and a much improved camera angle/fov/perspective.

SketchPad

10-11-2003, 05:55 PM

And yet another update:

http://www.hamsterking.com/3dmaxer/smokeyscene3d5.jpg

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