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URI::G
10-06-2003, 08:01 PM
this is my first reel. It's short, but fast-paced. I'd like your opinions on it. Sorry for the bad hosting... :(

edit: I have a new server, click the link

http://www.matteb.com/link.jpg (http://www.matteb.com/mbjurstromsreel.avi)

AJ
10-06-2003, 08:20 PM
Very nice work!

My only negative comment would be that the part where your rigged low-poly girl 'floats' from the right to the left is a little odd.

Aside from that - good stuff! :D

mattmos
10-06-2003, 08:55 PM
Yeah! Short but very sweet, excellent facial modelling and like the short movements of the heads which bring them to life. Have to agree with the 'floaty' comment above and possibly the next screen is held for a little too long compared to the rest of the reel.
Great stuff :thumbsup:

roarty
10-06-2003, 09:56 PM
aint workin

URI::G
10-06-2003, 10:04 PM
yeah, sorry .. It went down pretty fast. :(
I guess you have to wait some time and try again.
Unless anyone wants to host it for me. :hmm:

URI::G
10-11-2003, 07:02 PM
I have a new server, so you can download the reel now :)

http://www.matteb.com/mbjurstromsreel.avi

roarty
10-11-2003, 07:40 PM
nice job!

Looks really good :) you should be able to snag a job with it. There are a couple of things that I would advise though for future reference,

1. I would have more movement with the characters you modeled... Because people like to see how your characters can move around.. and if they deform properly

2. I didnt notice any of your mouths open (I DONT THINK) also try to have something as simple as a smile.

just for future

overall though, nicely done :applause:

katon
10-12-2003, 03:57 AM
Great work,
only a few comments i hope they help.

1) I like your models they are good
2)the reel seems a little speratic to me, i would show your models off more, spin the model all the way around at least once, it seems like you are about to show your model, then it stops, to me it was a distraction, i like how oyu moved the modesl heads, but when you spin the model, just spin it all the way around.
3)there where times where i thought you were going toshow a model off and it was just a still pic, it looked like oyu had some cool models, but did not show them that well. Maybe just revisit hwo you show your models off and i think it will be great.

Good job man. peace
Katon

jamesjhunt
10-12-2003, 08:55 AM
looks good! great modeling!
maybe som more animation would be nice,
unless your only looking for modeling jobs?

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