Enviroment : 3DS Max : Cave

[InAction]

No replies? I think it´s kind of good made. ^^

:thumbsup: :applause: :buttrock:

[-CCFly-]

nicely done, but some textures could use some work.

[RuneV]

Good ide! nice modelling.. Still some work on the textures :thumbsup:

[shards]

I like the basic idea, and the pic isnt bad..the only thing I'd suggest is a better lighting, I'm unable to see the background unless I crank up my monitor's luminosity!

[JRGauthier]

That's good!

You should consider working a bit on those textures.

Also, you should work on that lighting, right now it's looks like it's lighten by a bunch of neon lights, it's too bright(on my side, I see the background perfectly without ajusting my monitor). Suggestion: You should start lightings your scene by addings orange lights around those fire barrels. Then add lights little by little in certain areas of your scene until your satisfied with the result.

final note: Shadows are your friend, use them!;)

See ya!

Keep up the good work!:thumbsup:

[mage111]

its pretty good, i can see alotta effort wehnt into this, so here is my critisms for it, hopefully to make it better, not worse, and some of these have been mentioned, so not to re-itterate what others have said, but just to sum up wut i think could be improved upon

- you have some overall decent modeling, but the triangle like objects are really sharp edged, and simplistic for the object in the middle. another area in the modeling that concerns me some, is the staircase in the background, the steps seem awfuly steep, and small, i mean to me, it looks as if half my foot would only beable to stand on one of the steps. the ring going through the triangle pieces closest to us seems to be just that, going through it, it doesnt look as if any holes have been pre-made for the metal to be fed through it.

- as far as the camera is concerned, personally i'd like to see a closer look at the shrine/thing? on infront of the staircase, it looks, alot more interesting then what is shown in the forground.

- Also, the platform from where the image is rendered at, it looks as if it has no significants to the cave, because of the rope going on past it, to me, from what i see, if that platform is of any importance, i'd want easy access to it ;-)

- Lighting, definitely without opinion, this could be improved apon, everything i'd assume would create or reflect light does not seem to be used, there seems to be a source light elsewhere other then the fire, and the light projecting down on the shrine.

- also. there seems to be a lack of shadows as well, i dont see any on either side of the triangle pieces in the front, or any behind the staircase affecting the rock infront of it,
- textures, its been said and said, so i wont go into detail here, but i can at least say you chose some pretty good textures to do the job so far ;-)

overall, i could see this cave, with a little more complexity to the scenery and maybe the walk-ways, being used in a film or tv show, it really reminds me of stargate,

good work though, should be proud nontheless :-)

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