View Full Version : Dakota swan about finished requesting critic
Avitus12 10-04-2010, 03:20 PM She is a futuristic vampire commando.
just need some critic.
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/8813/dectoaswonfornet.jpg
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SageGod
10-06-2010, 04:47 AM
very nice.
The background however needs perspective seperation it doesnt flow with the foreground character.
Animasta
10-06-2010, 06:07 AM
I'd get rid of the "Dakota Swan" in the pic. It's distracting. The rest of the painting looks awesome though. Though I feel like the painting could be a little more refined (i.e. not so blurry in spots).
Avitus12
10-06-2010, 01:40 PM
Up date
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/3861/dakotaswannew.jpg
I've crisped it up a bit, but don't know what to do with the background :banghead:... any suggestions.
The title was random so it went.
dose the skin in some places look a little dirty "not red enough"?
Up dait
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/7014/dakotaswanfornet.jpg
I think I'm going to call this one finished.
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