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BlueFish
10-04-2003, 12:49 AM
Gday guys,

Knocked up a digital paint over the last few days. First time ever using painter!

Thoughts? Improvements? Some pointers to some excellent painter tutorials would be really helpful too.
BlueFish
10-04-2003, 12:53 AM
Sorry forgot to post the picture...
kuragari
10-06-2003, 02:35 PM
Good use of color and scale. Hightlights are good. Hrm. Try to save the image with a better quality. The JPEG artifacts take away from the image a bit. Also, the shadowing from/on the mountains seems to be a bit flat. Or perhaps is the beach that seems that way. When I look at the beach/mountain transition, my eyes are not perceiving depth. Also, your incoming waves appear to come from a radial source as opposed to a more linear source. This may have to do with the depth thing as well. From the mountains up, the image seems fine. Perhaps detail the light rays a bit. Edge of the mountains looks nice. I like the color choices, but the who depth thing is what's holding it back.
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