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Flemming Hansen 10-02-2003, 11:23 PM Well, here's a character I've been working on for a couple of months now (on and off). I would like some feedback on the anatomy of her , or if you see some errors that really needs to be changed.
Cheers!
http://www.theworms.com/job3.jpg
http://www.theworms.com/job.jpg
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Terro
10-03-2003, 03:53 AM
I see a few things that need adjustment. The nostrils are a bit wicked. Then the kness and elbows are to sharp. Keep at it, looking real nice :)
N3T-R0M
10-03-2003, 07:07 PM
she is quite nice, but i think the hands are VERY big. The head is too boxy on the top, and damn what a freaky cunt !
The knees and elbows are not good, they have very sharp edges..
The ears are some kind of elvish, i think :D
But it is a very fine model, and will be great if you fixed the points here...
PS. Why haven't you posted it on 3dmaxer ;-) We love to follow your Quinde project.. hehe
FallenSwordsman
10-04-2003, 08:19 AM
There are a few obvious areas that can be improved upon. The collarbones for one are way too straight, collarbones should be curved. Plus the deltoids are looking a bit flat where they meet the upper arm. I think you have some difficulty with joints as well. The lower arm going into the elbow has a great big lump on the upper side which looks out of place and the knees are very creased. Overall though - not too bad.
Flemming Hansen
10-04-2003, 04:33 PM
Thanks for your replys. I see I have my work cut out for me :)
@ Terro
yeah, how could i overlook those knees? I better increase my coffee rations :)
@ N3T-R0M
Big hands? I don't think so. As for the ears, I'm thinking about remodelling them (and also the "private parts":) ). I'll post an update on 3dmaxer, when she's fully textured.
@ FallenSwordsman
Good points. As for the arms, I think I have to clean up the wire. first (it's a mess!). Then I better take a peek in my anatomybooks again :).
BTW. What about the shoulderblades ? I'm having problems judging them myself. Are they ok, or??.. But again.. thanks for the replys. I'll post an update next week :D
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