CGTalk - Characer: Aquatic Beast

JCGA

10-02-2003, 11:22 AM

The grey background doesn't do it justice. Add a little something more exciting and maybe tweak the lighting a bit.

The creature looks great though, the textures seem a bit lowres at the moment but other than that, great work. :thumbsup:

XerC

10-02-2003, 12:13 PM

Too bad the blurry texture spoils it! :hmm: If you'd increase the resolution of the map, add more details to it an create a fine bumpmap this one would be absolutely suberb work. Then put it in a nice underwater scene and you have created some frontside stuff. I'm sure! :thumbsup:

Work on it. Please! :beer:

Greetings,
XerC

Kel Solaar

10-02-2003, 01:21 PM

Yes as said Xerc you have a very fine model but the texture is too much blurred, removing a lort of detail from what may have render the skin real. And a little bg with lighning setup will be better :)

xcvbnm

10-02-2003, 02:23 PM

Cool creature....nice details , anatomy looks technically realistic.
suggestions - What others said about textures and env + make the eye color black or some dark shade, work on nostrils....deepen the holes and it MUST have many big sharp teeth :beer: :thumbsup:

Macj

10-06-2003, 04:41 PM

Here are some updated renders of the beast. I have to do a spec map still, and texture the eye, and hopefully composite it into a scene. Comments were very helpful before, and I would welcome any further critique.

http://www.entropygraphics.com/josh_docs/NewBeast1.5.jpg

http://www.entropygraphics.com/josh_docs/NewBeast2.5.jpg

http://www.entropygraphics.com/josh_docs/NewBeast3.6.jpg

Macj

10-06-2003, 04:48 PM

Here is a wireframe shot,

http://www.entropygraphics.com/josh_docs/wire1.jpg

XerC

10-07-2003, 02:37 AM

Now this is much better! :beer:
The cage mesh shows you are quite skilled concerning polymodeling. :applause: And the displacement is just :eek:!

Keep it up (and don't stop adding details to the color- and bumpmap yet!) I'm looking forward to seeing this baby in a scene... :wavey:

Greetings,
XerC

Windmill

10-07-2003, 04:16 AM

wow very nice.. my only concern is the texture looks a bit blurred to me, I personally would like to see more detail.

Macj

10-09-2003, 04:00 AM

I've been so busy with other things, that I hadn't found time to properly detail this model; still, I did some touch ups, so check it out.

http://www.entropygraphics.com/josh_docs/UpdatedMonster1.jpg

http://www.entropygraphics.com/josh_docs/UpdatedMonster2.jpg

http://www.entropygraphics.com/josh_docs/UpdatedMonster3.jpg

http://www.entropygraphics.com/josh_docs/UpdatedMonster4.jpg

Zixe

10-09-2003, 04:04 AM

Very neat...reminds me of that one dino that beats up the T-Rex in Jerassic Park 3.

Is the inside of the mouth modeled?

Nice job

houston3000

10-09-2003, 06:09 AM

Wow, u really improved your textures from the first post... great work I also love his eyes.

please composite it or create a background, that would make it perfect

congrats on the great model :beer:

Humorix

10-09-2003, 06:22 AM

Great stuff! Loved the texture and the model.:beer:

ufo

10-09-2003, 02:17 PM

Very good modeling , hope to see the mouth with tooth !!!

aQu

10-09-2003, 03:08 PM

It looks pretty kind :p

karabo

10-09-2003, 04:28 PM

I would love to see that bad boy with his mouth open, showing his big teeth

H3x

10-09-2003, 07:42 PM

I agree, show some teeth. Looks really good. I like how the light reflects off of him like hes underwater.

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