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EdiblePoly
09-13-2010, 02:30 PM
Ok, so I should have come here and registered and posted sooner, but I kept putting it off. Anyway, final project for my character modeling class is to model a character (big surprise, right?) and get it critiqued on multiple websites. So here I am. The character I'm doing is Tank Girl, if you don't know who that is, here's some of the references I used:
http://i1.squidoocdn.com/resize/squi...1Tank-Girl.jpg (http://i1.squidoocdn.com/resize/squidoo_images/590/draft_lens8210461module70484841photo_1258934931Tank-Girl.jpg)
http://www.ezequielcruz.com/media/sl...ersonal/14.jpg (http://www.ezequielcruz.com/media/slideshow/personal/14.jpg)
http://dadadot.org/sr/tank.jpg
http://www.grrl.com/chair.gif

Now then, on to the images of the model itself. But before that, there's a few things I already know need adjustment. The ears are too far forward, but I'll be sliding them back once I go back into Max. And the arms are a bit too skinny and need some adjustment to the form. Also, will probably widen her midsection a bit. And the lips are looking odd in zbrush, but I'll fix them in Max. Also, it's still very much a work in progress, so the hair and the boots haven't been touched much at all yet. Anything else, I might not be aware of, so throw words at me. Thanks.

Headshot:
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t72/unstable_onuris/TG08.png

Fullbody:
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t72/unstable_onuris/TG09.png

Thanks for looking, now throw some words at me.

EdiblePoly
09-13-2010, 11:41 PM
No replies yet... but here's an update:



More Zbrush detail, base color polypaint, will be taking it back to Max and fixing things and adding detail to the Diffuse and making a spec in Photoshop.



Pictures:

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t72/unstable_onuris/TG08-1.png



http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t72/unstable_onuris/TG09-1.png



Throw words at me! Thanks.

EdiblePoly
09-14-2010, 04:46 AM
Ok, so since it's due tomorrow morning, I'm calling it done enough. Diffuse wasn't required, but I did the basic one anyway (I would have put more work into it if it had been required, for instance, the one-tone skin wouldn't be one tone). Anyway, I think I fixed the anatomical errors, I hope. Ears are positioned right, I moved the eyes down, made the arm slightly more realistic and thickened her waist just a tad; I did still want to keep it true to the Tank Girl comic book style though.

Anyway, here's some pictures, tell me how much you hate it and why so that I can improve in the future (or continue to look at it and say nothing at all, that's cool too). Thanks.

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t72/unstable_onuris/TGD1.png

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t72/unstable_onuris/TGD2.png

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t72/unstable_onuris/TGD3.png

YD3D
09-18-2010, 01:08 AM
Well, the thing that bothered me the most is the hair placement.
It looks as if it's coming out of her forehead. It's quite distracting.

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