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syklonis
09-29-2003, 07:50 AM
Hello all. Here's a first of hopefully many more to come. Done in P7 and Painter 8. I usually don't draw my images fully in the computer, but this time I needed some practice. I know I could of done a lot more but I just needed to get this one done. Hope everyone enjoys. Thanks for viewing...

-Syklonis

http://www.syklonis.com/my_art/flames.jpg
DOOMNINJA
09-29-2003, 10:33 PM
A suggestion if I may?

The 2 little glowing blue dots I find are really distracting. make them a bit less saturated perhaps, or remove them? I dunno, I can't stop looking at them now.

Oh, another one! Maybe convey a bit more emotion with robots eyes? Make them droopy like puppy eyes, as if it's sad or deffering to its master? Just might creat an interesting dynamic between the characters. Or not, its your painitng!

-Doom
mrgrfx
09-30-2003, 07:55 PM
First off great job for finishing the piece. It's a good work.

Now for harsh critique
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It's a nice image but for me it's not substantial. I can't really tell what is going on. Is this a broken robot that this demoness happened upon, or is this a pissed off robot fighting a losing battle against said demoness.

Demoness: She seems to be just standing there all uncomfortably. Maybe she doesn't like the idea of the robot wanting to touch her breasts? =) A little more detail around here rear and I think you'll get alot better responses from people.

Robot: Great detail on the sparky thing. I agree with Dninja about the dots. They do stand out almost like on another plain.
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