Character: Girl overlooking

[AFreeT!bet`]

i think she looks good man, iim not usre what look you were going for but it defintely should be hangin up seomwhere!:buttrock:

[Jerkazoid]

-bumping- because id like a bit more feedback. if your holding back.. dont.

[Agent D]

Other than the unrealistic proportions/attire, I would prefer a lot more contrast between the mountain she's on, and the plains below. I think it would look a lot more dramatic. Also, to me, those don't really look like storm clouds to the left, but it's hard to say. :shrug:

[RippleMDK]

The fuzz-i-ness of the picture makes me think that this is a dream, or that a viewer is just coming out of a dream. Especially with the exagerated proportions. I agree with needing a bit of contrast from the background. Maybe just more detail in the foreground so it doesn't all mesh together. I think that would get rid of some of the flatness. Other then that I might change the hair. Right now it looks like a wet clump... of course that could be what you're going for. Well that's my 2 cents... hope it helps.

[OrcOYoyo]

Her left shoulder isnt right concerning the proportions. the deltoideus isn't where it ought to be.
and the arms are very thin. almost as thin as her fingers.
but thats just my thoughts
I like the face :)

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