Animation: Tongue Twisters | The PlayOff

[Clockwork]

hehe I like the style of it, great job and pretty good animation, however the plot and sound isn't the best...

A Very nice look to it :)

[PAL]

Thanks :)

P.S. Something wrong with sound because not only you said me it. Is it very silently?

[ChrisHale]

I like your timing, it matched up really well to the audio. Your lipsyncing was also great. The general animation was cool too, it was very soft. Crits, your overall colour palette seems too saturated, you might want to mix it up some more. There was also some sound balance issue near the beginning.

[PAL]

Thank again

Crits, your overall colour palette seems too saturated, you might want to mix it up some more.

Why not? This is cartoon and i thought the colors must be very bright :)

[GUYJIN]

Really funny! :) And the animation is good too. A fresh change from all the dragon-big brested girl-elfy-orky-space clishes. Good job!

[PAL]

:beer:

[ChrisHale]

PAL, your choice of colours grows on me. But to answer your question as to why I suggested that you mix it up a bit, it just helps your characters pop out to someone that will only be watching it once. Since your characters hues are grouped together with background I just think mixing up the sat's and val's of the BG might help. Its just a personal preference and niggling on my part :D

[Ryan3D]

It looks like flover in the movie, good~!

[PAL]

Originally posted by ChrisHale
PAL, your choice of colours grows on me. But to answer your question as to why I suggested that you mix it up a bit, it just helps your characters pop out to someone that will only be watching it once.

Very interesting question for me. Maybe you right, but ... maybe you can show me what you mean ...

For example, this is real view which i had when rendering was completed

http://home.inet.lv/alexpet5/MR.jpg

And this is view after color correction

http://home.inet.lv/alexpet5/AE.jpg

I have made a mistake, isn't it? or not? Please, show me the correct colors :wavey:

[ChrisHale]

I'll see if I can come up with something for tonight for you once I get home. :)

[Peter Pan]

Палыч, ты крут!

Oh, man - that's a masterpiece, congratulations. As a matter of fact, I don't have any problems with the colors (as a consumer, though "professionals" might have another opinion). And, Tom and Gaijin - what's their input? Voices? :)

[PAL]

Thanx again :)

And, Tom and Gaijin - what's their input? Voices?

No :) They was my lead testers and sometimes gave me a good ideas.

[CGTalk Moderation]

This thread has been automatically closed as it remained inactive for 12 months. If you wish to continue the discussion, please create a new thread in the appropriate forum.