A New Comic Im Doing

[d0an]

i like it so far. the main character reminds me of goku kinda the hair style

[coreybastiaans]

I really like the style. You did a great job of making the character look consistent throughout comic. really nice job. I also like the shading style quite a bit

[Sir Greensock]

Very nice style. Seems like a cool variation of Akira Toriyama.
I think the folds could be a bit more dynamic, they dont fold according to his movements. (Only in his pants, the shirt is fine)
Whats with the go-gaia plug? Is it being posted there?
Also, I like the gray shading, but why did you render his mom's hair differently? It stands out too much.
So far so good.

[daraand]

Damn cool hairstyle indeed;) A few perspective quirks but cool

[AFreeT!bet`]

man, ir eally like your illustration. id love to color yoru scenes.

[gmoran]

Cool keyeske!!

Great sense of lighting in the drawing!! Are you going to colour it or just leave it b&W?

Cheers

[keyeske]

im leaving it in black and white

[Psycho Ken]

Good try.
comments is :take care of the prespective
2nd propotion
ink carefully coz not all the outlines are same shape.

u'll be good when u notice it.

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