Character: ---- LOST IN SPACE ----

[GSuRfer]

The Stlye is cool but the blurriness of the textures on the edge really distracts me from the charachter

[KapsuL]

thank you my man :)

[KapsuL]

This is the first one..


http://www.tiyatrol.com/baka.jpg

[KapsuL]

without blur

http://www.tiyatrol.com/baka7.jpg

[TumikSmacker]

I like it. Maybe try having the ground go out into the distance with some mountains in the background...Just a thought. Can't really tell where they are. Good start man :D

[KapsuL]

Thank you my friend :)

ý think that's good idea (mountains)

:beer:

[JonnyNewo]

That guy looks alot like orange Jello! Funny!

[KapsuL]

this is a new render with mountains

http://www.tiyatrol.com/baka8.jpg

[Plays_4_Pants]

Oh, I get it :rolleyes:

[e338]

forget this crappy environment. It doesn't fit with the character.
it's kinda cool all alone on the white background.

The girl is not good.

Could make a flyer with the jelly thing.

Just one advice, turn off materials, raytrace, shadows, etc etc... Does it look good anyway? It should (except maybe with cell shading stuff which is a bit special).
If not, you have to work.
it's too easy with CG...
courage

[KapsuL]

Thank you for your unmerciful critics..
But you are right about white background.

the girl is very primitive.... ý know ..

but this is the style. Maybe her body need to some correction.

however ý'm meeting to 3dmax since 5 months my friend.
I'm rookie for this. But already trying.

thank you again.

[animatethat3d]

I like the girl. Keep her, she gives this weird sense of contrast to the "jello" character. I like that contrast. I agree with the environment thing, though, it doesn't seem to be helping your design very much.
Keep at it!
:thumbsup:
-A

[rrobert]

Funny pic, but you should actually put this thread into the WIP section and not the finished gallery section, since it is not complete.. i guess

Grtz.. robert

[KapsuL]

I see another work is incomplete in here than my work.
But I'm respecting your idea Straightmark.


and animatethat3d I agree to
enviroment doesn't seem to be helping design very much



Thank you for all your impotant suggestion :)



:thumbsup:

[y2jade]

neato, but I think you should play with the pallet a bit more.:cool:

[KapsuL]

thank you y2jade

I'll do it :))

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