Character:Scarface pirate

[wgreenlee1]

your old posts... (http://www.cgtalk.com/search.php?s=&action=showresults&searchid=684953&sortby=lastpost&sortorder=descending)

Where the jewelry goes into the skin it should show where,there is nothing saying that they are actually going in the skin.They look like they are just sitting on the skin.
Looks cool though.Keep going.:thumbsup:

[Nebelis]

is there anyway to merge the old posts with the new?

[wgreenlee1]

Dont worry about it...just keep going on your model...:thumbsup:

[Nebelis]

thanks. for the crits too. duely noted.

[basselito]

I really like the whole model.

But serioulsy dude. Skip the piercing stuff. Imo it destroy the whole feeling of the character. If he would have any jewelry I would suggest some big ear rings.

But remember. It's just my opinion.

Once again. Nice character.

[Nazeil]

The model looks great! I would work on the texture a bit though. The skin is too monochromatic. Maybe try to add some subtle reds/purples underneath the eyes, and maybe some darker shading on the lips. just a thought

[Nebelis]

model has no textures yet except the eyeballs....

[Nebelis]

small update
http://img.tapuz.co.il/forums/21751274.jpg

[Nebelis]

an update...

http://img.tapuz.co.il/forums/21843438.jpg

[Nebelis]

...

[Nebelis]

another updatehttp://img.tapuz.co.il/forums/22110617.jpg

[Nebelis]

and another
http://img.tapuz.co.il/forums/22573895.jpg

[NelsonInomvan]

first of all that's a very nice model. From what you shown it's clear that you got some skill, but there is something that bothers me in your model of the head. At the first pic the head looks much better if you ask me, i mean the head is to wide in your next posts. If this is what you want try to make his mouth, nose a litte to wide and massive to. No it looks a little wierd ( my opinion )

my second crit is about your eye material. there is something wrong in your refleciotn or texture, i don't know what exactly but now the eye is reflecting the light a little strange. remember that the they didn't say that the eyes are the gates to the soul. Think about what your character is, what he wants, how he act and stuff like that. If he is strong and mean give him some small evil eyes. ( my thoughts )
The other thing about your eyes that bothers me is their shape. Is this a wanted look ?? right now they look kinda strange to me. First i thing that they are a little to long and is looks that they are rotated. If this is what you want it's ok whit me

anyway your model is starting to look good so keep up the good work

[Nebelis]

Atmos fear- I thinnk those are the best crits I got in any of the forums I posted this in. It gave me a lot to think about. Appreciate it.

There are no textures except on the eye which I just thew on in a few minutes- They will change when I get to the texturing part :).

thanks for the crits...

[Nebelis]

small update

http://img.tapuz.co.il/forums/22624461.jpg

[NelsonInomvan]

still there is something that bothers me in the head. Man look at this guys, he is strong and then again look at his nose and mouth, come on give them some space :)))

anyway i took the freedom to work a little bit on your pic to show you what i mean when i'm talking that your eye should look a little smaller and etc. I'm not shure what style you are after and if this is the look you want to achive but it'll get you the picture.

http://atmos.free-host.com/pirate.jpg

btw give us some info about this character, what you want to do whit him. What is the style you are after and stuff like that. And pls post some wire pics coz right now it's really hard to crit your model. let's see the wire

cya

[Agent 47]

Atmos: Just a thought, but could the distortion between his first post and the rest be a result of the first being from a perspective viewport render and the remaining from a user/front render?

Nebelis: I like the stapled-on look of the face jewelry. And if I'm wrong about the above, I agree with Atmos on the wider face.

Keep it up!

[Volcandro]

Bad bad pirate. :)
I like his bad face. Keep going man! The model is very good.

[Nebelis]

another update...
http://www.firedragon.com/~lwg3d/upload/wip/2003/11/07-243405.jpg

[nobrain]

manishma, sichakta otah, achi!

hope you can read that.
liking the model (although not too sure about the scar, perhaps I'll wait to see it textured before I crit on it)

what software do you use

[LowJacK]

I've got one question but first off I'd like to mention that it is good to see the progression of images you have posted.

My question is hero or villian? It is obvious that he had a dark side to him but the character itself isn't defined as good or bad. Right now he fits the anti-hero catagory quite nicely. Mean looking but still nice enough to like as a hero.

In the event that he is your villian, I suggest some alterations to his facial proportions. The standard villian has some form of mis-shaped or exagerated facial characteristic and the hero always has the symetrically perfect, chiseled good looks.

[Nebelis]

nobrain: toda hakol tov and thanks for the reply
lowjack: The chracter is a hero type. The thing is he's been in too many wars/fights/ and has a lot of "experience" Im trying to go for a look that says: " he used to be handsome but time, tear and wear got to him..."

[Nebelis]

working on the arms now...
http://www.firedragon.com/~lwg3d/upload/wip/2004/01/06-437791.jpg

[Nebelis]

http://www.firedragon.com/~lwg3d/upload/wip/2004/01/18-466606.jpg

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