Character: finding worm

[stezzy]

http://www.tecknieldesigns.com/stezzy/worm_ano%20copy.jpg

[BiTMAP]

Your character is good, your sceen is good, your lighting, textureing and such are all very good, the problem your having is in the pose, your worms pose isn't dynamic, its just laying there, it has no personification, becuase of the character'ness the worm looks like it just fell on its face... you need to raise the head off the ground to make it feel like its standing or sitting properly.


good job with the rest.

[stezzy]

thanx for your comment guy

[onscreen]

Dont mind to make a short film about it??

I love the worm! it is cute. Ya i agree on the pose you gave to the worm . Need some personalization.

MY GOD! didnt know you are from Malaysia too. Where are you from?

[coolhillstone]

Pretty little worm!
A short film will be a big projet.
Looking forward it.

[stezzy]

thanx u and nice to hear that.. yup it going to be a short film....and i am from malaysia (penang)

how do u find penang, came for vacation b4?

:):)

[stezzy]

i will post the animation once i had complete..and need u guys comment soon :)

[FLOw]

I sort of feel that a worm like that will be..hmm..different to animate, and will be difficult to work with when u want to do some cartoon style moves..but if you pull it of, its gonna be cool :)

[Mr.Prince21]

I MEAN FIRST OF ALL I LOVED THE WORM AND I DO THINK U SHOULD DO A SHORT FILM IF IT INSPIRES U TO DO SO. AND ONE MORE THING, WHERE IS MALAYSIA?

[Wonderer]

It's a cute little character... for a worm.
I really loved the lighting and the texturing, but the pose needs some work as mentioned.:applause:

[JIII]

well malaysia rhymes with asia doesn't it?

That should give you a few good hint.

Yea that is quite good but it looks like finding a paraplegic worm right now lol.

give him a pose.

[stezzy]

yup i will make a pose for the worm.......:)

i can imagine that it will looks better and interesting

cheers:beer:

[BiTMAP]

I'm so glad that i posted a comment that was useful lol, its just thats something we're covering in my drama class (even though i'm in year 2 of highschool, i'm in a year 1 drama class, and the teachers trying to get kids to be fully into the character and make stronger character choices).

I can't wait till you've finished!

[ppl_friend]

well done my dear.... the worm is lovely... & i like the lighting very much...i wonder if you can try your own mapping images but not 3dmax image... for the stone... if i am not mistaken you are very good in creating this kind of images right?^^ try some noise bumping on it but not too rough.... i am looking forward to see your animation....:applause:

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