3d Model: Girl

[Murf_Miser]

I should also note, that the eyes i got from a tutorial over at 3dluvr.com

[zeroeefx]

loops look good overall hard to see the face, need another pic, hands look to small too

[Murf_Miser]

Thanks zero, I've upped 2 closeup wires of the face for you, and thanks for your comments, I've noticed alot of time cg artists do overexagerate the hands, i don't really know why this is, but i tryed to more acuratly model the hands, do they look off proportionate? In which way do you think i should make them bigger (Plane x,y,z?)

FaceFront (http://myimgs.com/data/murfmiser/facewirefront.jpg)
FaceSide (http://myimgs.com/data/murfmiser/facewireside.jpg)

[zeroeefx]

(like left to right from the pic shown, base of hand to tip of fingers) i would have told you a direction but i couldn't not tell if your useing a y up world or not. the edge loops in the face are nice. from the side shot i think you should move the eyes back a little (take away soem of that flatness feel. Hope this helps and good luck

[Murf_Miser]

I thought that you guys would be critiquing away by now, i guess i should be happy you guys can't find much to say. Anyway thank you very much zeroeefx for your comments, i do agree with your comments on the eyes and hands, and i will see if i can't fix it. Any body else care to comment?

[mischief5star]

The only thing i would say is that it looks like in the profile pic that her eyeballs are pushed alittle far back in thier sockets other than that good work>

edit: sorry that was already mentioned i guess i should learn to read

[Murf_Miser]

mischief5star - I think that zeroeefx was talking about the eye in general, like the part around the eyball, but i see what you mean by pulling it forward, i'll probably kill 2 birds with one stone so to speak by just pulling the eyepart backward, thanks for your comment though. Anything else?

[daniella3d]

I think there is a lot to improve on it but its a good start. I think the legs should be more defined for the muscle structure as they look rather straight like "bagette" and lack a bit of shape. You should consult an anatomie book to see how they should be shaped. I think the nose is also not right. It's too large, especially in the middle part but all the way as well.

the waist? looks a bit too hight and her silhouette looks a bit too masculin too. maybe make it more slim and lower the hips a little. You could put in much more detail of the anatomy and more muscle contour. I am not suggesting to create a body builder but something that show a bit more definition in the muscle structure like any normal female have.

I think the eyes are maybe too far apart. If you make the nose a bit more narrow, you could bring the eyes a bit closer too.

[Murf_Miser]

Thanks daniella3d for your reply, i agree with the legs, i kinda hurried through them, mainly cause i don't think that they will be seen to much, so i'm not really gonna worry bout them. as for muscle structure, yeah, obviously i'm not an expert or anything, but i tried to get away with as much detail as i could, if i ever come back to work on this model, the legs, and the hip area would be the first thing i would work on. As for the face, i will try moving the eyes closer together, and narrowing the nose down a bit. I'll keep you updated

[Murf_Miser]

Ok, my first attempt to narrow all elements led to utter disaster, the face became more masculane, so i gave it another try, and i got slightly better results. I also pulled back the sorounding eye skin, and that kinda killed the flatness mentioned. Well here are the links...

Front (http://myimgs.com/data/murfmiser/front.jpg)
Side (http://myimgs.com/data/murfmiser/side.jpg)

[Visioneer]

Sorry, your account has expired. I really want to see your images, though.

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