View Full Version : ANIMATION: AMD Athlon 64 contest semi-finalist!!!

09-23-2003, 09:08 PM
Hey guys ... I would like to post my short film "Toothless" here but I'm a broke bum that just got out of school (and looking for work) and can't afford webspace...

however, I'm a semi-finalist for the athlon 64 animation contest (yay me) and they are hosting my entry which is a 45 sec. clip from my short film. You can see it here...


its the "toothfairy on the prowl"

check it out and let me know what you think...Tell me what needs to be worked on for when I do my next short...


09-25-2003, 12:30 AM
Nobody has anything to say? I need to hear whats wrong with it....cmon guys ...help me out here.

I'll have my full short film posted here soon... I think maybe tomorrow...

09-25-2003, 02:15 AM
Nicely Done,

There's a bit of a "feature film" minute thing happening here, as if we were dropped into a bigger narrative. Not bad as it goes, but it's not the traditional short form. A bit of conflict could have gone a long way...girl's waking up, etc. Nonetheless, some wonderfully observed characters, and I like the ease you had with timing.


09-25-2003, 03:07 AM
There's a bit of a "feature film" minute thing happening here, as if we were dropped into a bigger narrative.

It's a clip from my actual short film "Toothless" which is 3:45 long. I promise you there is a whole lot more of a story there! The only reason I didnt enter the whole thing into the competition is because it had a "30-45 seconds max" rule. I want to post my film here because I would relly like to hear what people think about it but unfotunately I just got out of school and have no money for webspace. My friend says he will host it if I can get it down to 10 megs... I'm trying....hopefully soon I can post it!


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