Character: Groof

[phoenix]

fix the chest area..its not right

ear pircing i mean the ear ring should be put more convincingly.....

tyre should be squased....

dont extrude the elbow that much


but i like the overall idea of the character.....

[Jerkazoid]

pretty darn cool if u ask me.

hey, do the Nostrils deform like the eyebrows? i see a little. but thats cause of the long expression.

have you thought about giving him some bump...

everything is all smooth no differing tactileness.... i think it would really add to his "alive" factor if he had indications of wrinkles and stuff, and some tire treds too.

maybe just paint the texture if u dont wanna use bumpmaps.

[abe3d]

In addition to what's been already said, good textures would really bring him to life. And I'd personally be more interested in this character if his arms were longer and were used to balance himself on the wheel. maybe some worn gloves can help showing that he's over worked them as breaks! good work regardless. ;-D

[daviddrbal]

Thanks for comments men. I think I've got right comments for improve him.

phoenix: You right about elbow and tire. The chest are strange I know, but I've try give him more tiny and ofcourse different look.

Jerkazoid: I'm always a littlebit afraid use bumps, I don't know why, but sure you right don't make him so smooth looking skin .. yeap.

[daviddrbal]

Before I see your comments I've done this. It's was done according the storyboard for upcoming short with Groof.

test01 (http://dreamtalks.nstemp.org/cgtalk/TEST11.JPG)
test02 (http://dreamtalks.nstemp.org/cgtalk/TEST10.JPG)

[fighter]

My girl becomed sorry for him
She was asked me: where is he legs?
Sorry
But this idea is good for me. Agree about the elbows. May be little bump on the tyre?
What the software do you use for that? To see the mesh will be interesting.

[daviddrbal]

Originally posted by fighter
My girl becomed sorry for him
She was asked me: where is he legs?
Sorry
But this idea is good for me. Agree about the elbows. May be little bump on the tyre?
What the software do you use for that? To see the mesh will be interesting.

He's not invalid.. that's what he actualy is - your girl don't need to be sad about it.


Here are wireframes you have ask for.
01 (http://www.dreamtalks.org/cgtalk/wire01.jpg)
02 (http://www.dreamtalks.org/cgtalk/wire02.jpg)
03 (http://www.dreamtalks.org/cgtalk/wire03.jpg)

PS: ....and I'm using LigtWave 7.5

[fighter]

Thanks for the meshes!
I just have seen your iterview. Other your works looks good
Successes in a future!

[Modron]

Tire could use a tread pattern. nice!

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