Character: Pic Of New Sexy Girl

[Bonguru]

neet!;)

[Pluffo]

I would say scary. Not sexy :)

[phoenix]

good attempt.........

can i critsize:(


ok lets start from head....

if u want to make beauti piece then reduce the distance of the eyes....

fix her ear........its not right and even if u want to make it that way then.......get them little in.......they are extruding outside

i see a conflic in the hair .......well what i see....is that those freely hair are too thick........ok let me say its ur style......but then what about the pony tails or whatever u call em....they too thin ....get the idea...

breasts.....according to the laws of normality they dont make sence to me......that is look at where they are placed.....too extruded....

nukles

............fine its style i an agree on that.....but dont u think ur hands are too rectangular....


ur weapon....if u look at it carefully is not right perspectively......u can fix that....and the fabric hanging off it is not right as well....the fabric in front is not suppose to be there.....i think u will get the idea.....what i trying to say look at it carefully.,....



legs
tooo thick and volumatric....too cylinderical....
both shoes not equal in size....dont say its perspective:Dplz....at this distance perspective does not affect that much....

my critisim is not meant to mock at ur work..........so no offence friend...

[keyeske]

:)

[phoenix]

:thumbsup:

[lmc]

Goodjob, nice design...but its not sexy for me....however i will call it angry....:p

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