Animation: Short sci-fi movie -- TRAILER

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[Daz]

::PROBLEMS::
-Characters bones or biped do not match up correctly, ensure all verticies are attached to appropriate links
(for example, look at the girls dress)
-Poor colour and lighting
-need bump maps on characters to create more depth, characters are to smooth
-Colour scales vary to much, in one scene its nice with many colours, the next its mostly blue colours followed by more colour then no colour on the final
-strange camera close up on mechs
-strange motion blur effect on mechs, seems slightly off time
-objects move at unusual rates ( the robots on the ground hussltle past and dont move in natural paths)

::IDEAS::
-in the last scene the cars are all over the street like they are abandond, however they all still look in perfect condition, make the cars look smashed and rusted instead OR if you wish this to look as though the city is still alive at the time of being destoryed make it so the cars are moving along the road.
-Rather than all the robot scenes in the day, why not make one at night, shinning glowing lights would look great
-The girl looks horrible, i understand the point you are trying to cross over however, instead of a girl picking up a flower and dropping it at the end how about a toddler running along with a teddy that gets droped at the end?, the problem with the girl is her dress and the fact that her hair makes her look less inocent, why not long blond hair and blue eyes?
-A more personal touch on the trailer would be nice, cameras going past people talking, shaking hands, hugging kissing (not all just one or the other, dont wanna over do) this would go well with the little girl.
-not just the one type of mech, maybe a tank or soldier to

[BaranWearraan]

The thing bothering me the most were the poor shadows in the first part. It was really flickering.

You have been watching movies, that's pretty obvious :)

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