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yellowworm
09-17-2003, 09:33 PM
http://blackeden.org/images/closure.jpg

http://blackeden.org/images/closure_cu.jpg

painter7/photoshop....

NowhereMan
09-17-2003, 10:11 PM
Hey! I like it, its very good, the composition is very good, but i think you could stick to the spooky and dark mood instead of daylight.... it should be interestting to try this way.

You could blend the characters with the background more easilly.

:beer:

yellowworm
09-17-2003, 10:17 PM
thanks for the feeds...

it's a divorce piece...i dunno.

GrantMan
09-17-2003, 10:22 PM
Nice work... I like the sharp contrasts and stylized approach. I think the colors you have set a pretty interesting mood for the image.. My only suggestion would be to sharpen the wings a bit more like the faces... But still good regardless.

:thumbsup:

yellowworm
09-17-2003, 10:30 PM
cool. i'm trying to find a mix, ya know, between absolute detail and "painterly"...

frazetta pulled it off amazingly.

BRUTICUS
09-18-2003, 07:34 PM
the style and craftsmanship is great and idea is cool, the only thing that stands out to me is that he doesn't seem to have any problem at all holding this girl off the ground. She appears to be as light as a feather.

Even if this character is meant to have the strength of 10 men or whatever it makes it look more realistic to show some struggle in lifting something off the ground.

Fatalis
09-18-2003, 07:54 PM
I like their faces.

yellowworm
09-18-2003, 09:52 PM
bruticus, i think you might be right...

i tried to put strain and muscle flexing into his arms so it would like he was actually holding something...but maybe it wasn't enough.

Nostradamus
09-18-2003, 09:56 PM
thats damn awsome, but i think you should change the color of the shoes to something darker, and make pic a bit darker :thumbsup:

Angel D
09-19-2003, 09:26 AM
I like your work. It's better than mine... I do notice one thing though... The position of his right arm under her back wouldn't support her like that, but it's not really noticible. I caught it on the close up, but that was long after I saw the panty shot. I like the daylight look, not what you'd expect. He's the forigen element in the picture as something like that should be.:thumbsup:

yellowworm
09-19-2003, 09:53 AM
wow Angel, that was a really deep response. thanks.

did you like the panties? :)
her pants would always fall down dude!
no matter what...serious, that girl's ass had
massive claustrophobia issues.

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