3D-Woman : 2040

[kiko3d]

That´s some kickass modelling, are you gonna put some textures to it?
And have you studied fine arts?

[openopen]

Thanks kiko3d..
I'm not sure for texture and I'm not a best one for the tex..
Fine Art? well...I got BFA and I'll get MFA in December(S.F.)
Thanks again please keep in touch.

Jin : EX3D

[kappu]

this is crazee man awesome.
out to kick all super heros butt
loove her
:rolleyes:

[openopen]

Thanks kappu
Please come by my web site (www.ex3d.com) in time and leave your comment on the guest book.

Thank you.

[kiko3d]

I´m gonna study here in spain what I think is the equivalent to a mfa, 5 years of fine arts, and I´m not really an artist. Do you think is difficult to major arts, I mean is difficult to learn how to draw properly?

[openopen]

I don't think it is too difficu-,
Here is some tricks. close your eyes and draw number 3 on the paper. Open ur eyes see what you drew. I believe there is surely number 3 you can read. I think drawing is not matter of hand and skill. It is strongly related with ur brain, knowledge and eye. If you can draw something on your mind with your closed eye because you know completely about it, you can draw on the paper. It is drawing. Carefully look at everything and put the infomation in to your brain, finally you will draw.
I'm sorry. I'm not good one for drawing or FineArt but I got the tricks(?) form my long experience.

thanks again and Good luck to you.

www.ex3d.com

[Mescalito256]

Looks really good, I can't really find any flaws with the character itself. The clothing looks amazing and I love the billowing coat.

The gun could stand to be a little smaller. It looks like you were trying to mimic the bow and arrow in a more futuristic way. If so, you should look at some reference pictures of people using a bow -- the hand holding the arrow is usually aligned with their ear and the left elbow should not be locked upwards like that.

Good job so far. :beer:

-M



PS: Are you going to texture it?

[ppself]

i like it but my only comment would be the jacket it looks to stiff or maybe it the way its waving in the wind that doesnt convince me. good job though :thumbsup:

[leigh]

Nice model overall (would be nicer to see it textured and lit though ;)), I can see a few small problems though:

- the arms look a little too long.
- the arm that is bent is bending in a very unnatural way, as the bend is too wide.
- the billowing jacket, as ppself mentioned, is not all convincing.
- the head looks too small for the body.

Apart from that though, she's an interesting character. I like the choice of weapon too - it's really unusual :)

[elevationson]

I think I see a nipple in that first pic, did you forget her shirt there.

kick ass model though

[fattyLees]

Ahh...I'm glad you mentioned the nipple.
I'm an animator, so I'm not the best judge of a model, but it seems her areolas pertrude quite a bit. My girlfriend agrees too...she thinks the edges of the areola should be a little more flush with the breast.
Spectacular job though... my comments are only nit-picking the model...it was just the first thing i noticed.

Good job,
Eric

[openopen]

Thank you guys so much.
Everything was good and helpful.
I'll think about that.

Thanks again.
Please come by my web site (www.ex3d.com) in time.

Jin : ex3d.com

[openopen]

Hi fattyLees!!!
I know you, I think we took the same class. I think it was Oliver's directed study class. isn't it..
Thanks and keep in touch!!

Jin : ex3d.com

[PureFire]

very interesting design. As mentioned the position of the arms and the weapon makes her look very weird and unnatural.

Apart from that you have a kickass model dude...awesome!

[wgreenlee1]

No crits here!

Awesome stuff openopen!:thumbsup:

[openopen]

Thanks wgreenlee1 and all.

[onscreen]

Good concept for the bow and arrow gatling gun :P

i just love that. :D

modelling wise, i dont see any errors on it. And... hope to see a textured version.

[openopen]

Thanks onscreen!
Good to see your praise.
I'm not sure for tex-

thank you so much and please come by my web site.
I hope you enjoy it.

Jin : ex3d.com

[digitalputty]

Originally posted by openopen
I don't think it is too difficu-,
Here is some tricks. close your eyes and draw number 3 on the paper. Open ur eyes see what you drew. I believe there is surely number 3 you can read. I think drawing is not matter of hand and skill. It is strongly related with ur brain, knowledge and eye. If you can draw something on your mind with your closed eye because you know completely about it, you can draw on the paper. It is drawing. Carefully look at everything and put the infomation in to your brain, finally you will draw.
I'm sorry. I'm not good one for drawing or FineArt but I got the tricks(?) form my long experience.
www.ex3d.com

Wow ... that is some good advice. I never really thought of it like that!

I really like that model. And ... I would like to see it textured. :)

[openopen]

I'm sorry about a kind of arrogant advise..
Just I wanted to share my experience.

Anyway Thanks a lot digitalputty!!
Enjoy my other stuffs.

Jin : www.ex3d.com

[digitalputty]

NO NO! I didnt think it was arrogant ... it made me think. I should be thanking you. :) :wavey:

[sixthe45]

All I can say: nicely done :applause:

[openopen]

Thanks sixthe45!!!
What an encouraging word !
Please keep in touch and

Thank you so much digitalputty!!

[dickma]

Originally posted by openopen
I don't think it is too difficu-,
Here is some tricks. close your eyes and draw number 3 on the paper. Open ur eyes see what you drew. I believe there is surely number 3 you can read. I think drawing is not matter of hand and skill. It is strongly related with ur brain, knowledge and eye. If you can draw something on your mind with your closed eye because you know completely about it, you can draw on the paper. It is drawing. Carefully look at everything and put the infomation in to your brain, finally you will draw.
I'm sorry. I'm not good one for drawing or FineArt but I got the tricks(?) form my long experience.

thanks again and Good luck to you.

www.ex3d.com

I like what you say......
My current obstacle/barrier is always from my computer.
I can do more in my mind, actually.

[openopen]

Thanks Dick Ma!

I like your words
"I can do more in my mind, actually."
I do agree completely!
Please keep in touch!


Jin : ex3d.com

[mindrot]

Hi there...:wavey:

my only real criticism is the proportions: Her head seems way to small in comparrison to the rest of her body, and her ass seems to be sagging a bit too low.

[openopen]

Thanks mindrot
I think it is little small..good point.

Thank you so much.

Jin : ex3d.com

[kiko3d]

Just think that your model is awesome apart maybe from the arm that bends unnaturally, just like someone said before, btu I repeat myself about the textures.

[openopen]

Thanks again Kiko-
I just wanted to make wind blow inside jacket arm..
But it was good enough..hum..
Anyway thank you so much..

Jin : ex3d.com

[DreamcastDC]

Looks pretty good, cant wait until you texture it.

[Incrediblah]

pretty nice model, but the pose is kinda week, and really stiff looking. word

[openopen]

Thanks Incrediblah,DreamcastDC.
I think it is not a dynamic pose. I just changed little bit from the set up pose(?)..
Thanks a lot. That was good point.
Please come by my web site and enjoy more dynamic(?) poses..
:)

Jin : EX3D.com

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