3d HEAD wip

[wolver]

hey guy remember C&C are welcome !

http://manoll.free.fr/peter/visager/2.jpg

[wolver]

ha ha ha ha

nobody wants to say a word ?

here is the next step, as i told you it can be interesting to show all the steps, isnt it a WIP forum ??

http://manoll.free.fr/peter/visager/3.jpg

[wolver]

hehe still boycoting me ...

anyway
http://manoll.free.fr/peter/visager/4.jpg

[wolver]

next step :
http://manoll.free.fr/peter/visager/5.jpg

[wgreenlee1]

Yeah this is pretty damn good man....
I like the form.
The front of the ear where it connects to the head looks like it isnt flush with the skull but keep going on this.Looking good!:thumbsup:

[wolver]

thank you wgreenlee1 you are my only friend here ;)

i will continue anyway !

heeerrrreee is the next one !!

http://manoll.free.fr/peter/visager/7.jpg

ps: thank you for all your comments guys !!

[cybernaut]

You made some excellent progress since your first post, well done. :buttrock:

Are you going to build some mastoids muscles into his neck?

You might want to work on the shape of his lips, particularily his lower lip.

[kiko3d]

You gotta fix the seam, one to do it, my way to do it is creating another edge, just with the cutting tool if your using max, right near the seam, I guess your using the symmetry modifier, and put the vertexes on that line you created in the same exact place of the others in the seam, hope you understood me if not just mail me kiko3d@hotmail.com

[babaloud]

kiko3d is right...make mine his words....
keep it going....just getting better

[wolver]

thank you friends !
i just didnt understand everything you said kiko3d sorry .... it must be my bad skill in english....what is a seam ?


here is the next step
http://manoll.free.fr/peter/visager/09.jpg

[kiko3d]

The seam is the line that you had in the middle of your model, but know i see you fixed it so don´t worry about it.

[WChestnutt]

it's ok, i'll be your friend! :) :beer:

it's looking very good!! better than anything i could do. the only thing i can say is keep working on the textures, they still need a little something to bring the model to life.
apart from that very good modeling.

Keep it up

Will

[wolver]

ok guys,

i made a mistake i didnt do the eyes right so i am redoing almost the entire face, eyes + nose...

here is the last image before the changes

http://manoll.free.fr/peter/visager/15.jpg

the eyes looks shity and unnatural...

i am working on it

thanks

[wolver]

i am back,

with an entirly new head, at the begining i wanted to redo only the eyes and modify the nose, but the result was not good at all so..,

here it is, tell me what you think about , is it better or worst than the first one ?

C&C very welcome

thanks

http://manoll.free.fr/peter/visager/38.jpg
http://manoll.free.fr/peter/visager/37.jpg

ps: you can see the steps here:
http://manoll.free.fr/peter/visager/

[Troy]

Originally posted by wolver
thank you wgreenlee1 you are my only friend here ;)

i will continue anyway !

heeerrrreee is the next one !!

http://manoll.free.fr/peter/visager/7.jpg

ps: thank you for all your comments guys !!


With black curly hair, this looks very much like an annoying boy at my school...He has that mouth-grimace look.

anyway...the final thing looks good, except the ears are maybe too small?

peace out.

[steadi]

I really like the modelling and the skin texture, the eyes however could be better IMHO.
They seem a bit lifeless, they should be much more reflective (both specular and real reflections).
Also, I think the iris and surrounding areas are a little on the big side
Finally, you might want to work on the eyelashes some more, they seem a little too thick and straight.
maybe you could also add a specular light to the GI render you did so you can see (some) highlights and shadow, give it a little depth.
Other than that, it's really looking cool...will you be doing a body as well?

[wolver]

hi,

ok here are the latests steps

http://manoll.free.fr/peter/visager/43.jpg
http://manoll.free.fr/peter/visager/44.jpg

steadi:

i will try to make better eyes, but as you certainly know its the hardest part of the work ...
i will add a bigger reflection texture in specular, but do you know how to add a good reflection into 3ds ?

for the render i use only skylight does anybody know how to make the render better ?( i am not so good in rendering..)

i will try to finish the head and after that if everybody tell me that it's good i will maybe make a body.

BTW what about the last head ? is the new one better ??
( say yes ....)

thanks

[steadi]

Agreed, eyes are bloody difficult (just started on my own character so I'm facing the same crap).
You're probably just using a single sphere for the eyes, you could try adding another sphere over the eye and assigning that material that has an opacity map of a bright spot (white spot on black background).
The add the reflection to that sphere and give it a very high specularity and glossines.
Then give the eye itself a more even specularity (the way you have it now I think)
This way you have almost a window, should give it a nice layered look and give some depth to the eye.
I'm sure there are some great tutorials on making a good eye on the internet.

For the render, what you could try is adding a spot light and then go to advanced effects (in the light's properties) and turn off "affect diffuse"
This way you get some nice specular highlights.
I hope this was helpful/made sense....
And by all means, make a body for him!
Peace, R.

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