character: hottie schoolgirl

[javasupai]

From 0 to 10, I would put you a 5.

Strange breasts, the leg is like bended with the
other leg and the boot seems to doesn't match the
picture (too much detailed and in a curious position).

[phoenix]

nice try but there are some major perspective errors


1. u see her left leg.........seems to be coming out of the wrong area:D

2. her right hand is telling that the perspective is different compared to what her feet telling

3. her left arm seems to be little longer......


thou i like ur signature:D

[TimeSpiral]

Thanks for the crits...

Javasupai, you think her breasts look strange? I was trying to stay away from the stereotypical comic-booky huge boobs curse that so many artists now-a-days are infected by. I thought they looked fine.

I agree that the perspective on the crossed knee area looks confusing, I should have adjusted it slightly to make it look more correct.

I was kinda envisioning her to be sitting on a ledge of some sort with her legs dangling down, which is why her hands are where they are in relation to her legs...although her hidden right hand should be peeking out from behind her knee.

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