View Full Version : WIP: Cartoon Character
Kormendi 09-15-2003, 02:38 PM This character is for an upcoming short that I'm doing (which seems to be taking forever!) I've nearly completed him, but I would like some feedback. I know the renders suck, but comments on the style and such would be greatly appreciated.
http://www.jwagroup.com/gfx/jerry_head.jpg
http://www.jwagroup.com/gfx/jerry_front.jpg
http://www.jwagroup.com/gfx/jerry_back.jpg
Thanks.
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Ozzman
09-15-2003, 05:37 PM
I like this style and like this chracter but try adding some more poly to the eyebrow :buttrock:
gunslingerblack
09-15-2003, 06:31 PM
ok here's what i think , ur model is pretty solid, i wouldn't change very much, however, the mouth, make it closed and not smiling you can make him smile that big when u morph him or use blendshapes or whatever app ur using calls it, second just work on ur texture map for his hair, it looks pretty good from far out but when u get close you can tell exactly what photoshop brushes you used . okie so that's it
keep going
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