Mystik Old Book

[themonke]

awesome book, you could do a bit more work on the crows, make them more...feathery

[OlafK]

the ground could use some work..looks game-alike (flat and boring textures :P)

i like the colors at the first one better, but there's no rose there. I would put the rose in the first one too, and some more towards the book.

The rose itself looks a bit odd, transparent, but it's good in the whole picture

the book itself is very detailed, thats probably where u spend most of your time working on....

the raves' legs are odd, flat....maybe some smoothing and it's good

keep it up ;)

[Steel GER]

Thx for your comments !!

:beer:

You are right.Most of the time i have spent with texturing the book. I will try to change the ground and the style of the crows a little bit.

thx again !

Some more comments ???

[berniebernie]

wow, pretty good book texture - i agree with the crows though, maybe add some movement, they look too - static (another postion/wings unfolded/darker ?). Nice job though ?

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