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mFlux
09-13-2003, 12:30 PM
I don't have a name for her yet.

I posted progress of her at the focused critique forum. Thanks for all the help guys. I'm exhausted.

She will go into my portfolio. I think she's one of my best "solid" character models so far. I wish I did better on the scalp (maybe fix that next week...).

Anyways, comment away please.

http://www.design.ucla.edu/~mflux/posted/mangacharShot1.jpg

http://www.design.ucla.edu/~mflux/posted/mangaCharaShot2.jpg

http://www.design.ucla.edu/~mflux/posted/fg.jpg

http://www.design.ucla.edu/~mflux/posted/wireframe2.jpg
Mikademius
09-13-2003, 01:53 PM
Hehe, at first I didn't like the nose, but after checking out the second image, I love it. I believe you would encounter some problems with those shoes. I mean, getting a realistic walkcycle with those rocks
mFlux
09-13-2003, 08:05 PM
Heya. Thanks for the comment. I agree about them shoes.... should I slice the bottom a bit so it arches more?
fiercekitten
09-13-2003, 08:16 PM
I think your pointer fingers are bent a little much
sixthe45
09-14-2003, 05:38 AM
Character looks cute :love:
Good work.
childplay
09-14-2003, 08:00 AM
I like it...expecialy the second image. the pose is good, has a spirit.

all the best
nikola drincic
wgreenlee1
09-14-2003, 09:33 AM
:thumbsup:


Lovely character!
DJ Scorchio
09-14-2003, 09:42 AM
Yea, the nose and upper lip look a little odd to me, but appart from that she looks really great :) I like the belt!
Good job
Miau
09-14-2003, 10:20 AM
cool work!
the only thing im not happy with is the hair texture.. it just looks a bit transparent... maybe add a colormap here?

cheers :beer:
FLOw
09-14-2003, 12:12 PM
damnit!
I'we been wanting to do something like that for sooooo long dude...thats crazy :) you so have to do another and do a animation, something with a FF9 spirit to it....damnit....*walking out slaming the door*



:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
U3ie
09-14-2003, 03:35 PM
nice textureing... very impressive :applause:
Jyrlof
09-14-2003, 04:40 PM
Very nicely done!
mFlux
09-14-2003, 06:15 PM
Wauuuu!! Thanks for the comments :love:

Miau~~ what did you mean by colormap? The hair might be a bit too transparent at the top but showing the eyes thru the hair a bit I think is ok... no?

FLOw~~ :) do one!! yeah.. I think I may do another. These characters are fun. Some tetsuya nomura influence here if you didn't notice.

I'm also doing a turntable animation of it right now. Here are two screencaps from it:

http://www.design.ucla.edu/~mflux/posted/mangachar00001.jpg
http://www.design.ucla.edu/~mflux/posted/mangachar00053.jpg

Unf. Thanks again!
Incrediblah
09-15-2003, 01:32 AM
one thing that caught my eye was the texture down the center on the front and back. you can see the seem on the pattern you have there. other than that, good job
dirkusrhombas
09-15-2003, 06:40 AM
I think the "scalp" the nose and the cheekbones could use more attention ... other than that I love it especially the dress which is stunning .
p0lym0rph
09-15-2003, 09:38 AM
verry nice,verry sweet,the air need little more work:thumbsup:
shashhh
09-15-2003, 10:14 AM
NICE JOB, HERE ARE SOME CRITS I HAVE

1. THE FACE : ITS NOT THAT CUTE AND BEAUTIFUL ACCORDING TO HER BODY....YOU SHOULD MAKE HER MORE DELICATE......

2. HAIR : SOMETHING ODD.....I CAN SEE PATCHES NO HAIR THERE....DO SOMETHING ON HAIR...PUT SOME HAIR TEXTURE ON IT WHICH IS VISIBLE ENOUGH AND CAN CONVINCE ONE THAT ITS HAIR.....

3. BODY AND COSTUME : THATS GREAT....I LOVE THEM.....

4. SHOE : YEAH IT'LL BE A BIG HASSLE TO ANIMATE THEM....IF YOU WANT THEM TO DEFORM PROPERLY, THEY WONT.......I DONT KNO ITS PER MY THINKING.....MAY BE YOU CAN DO IT BUT I CANT....

OTHER THAN THESE, ITS A GOOD MODEL TO PUT IN TO YOUR POTFOLIO FOR SURE........GREAT JOB...

HOPE TO SEE YOU MORE FROM YOU..
:buttrock:
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