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rockah
04-26-2010, 07:58 PM
This is my first mate painting, I've based it on pictures i taken in the Industrial Design Dept . and images from google for the mountains etc. combined with 3d elements I made.
This is part from Art Direction curse in my academy Bezalel.
c&c are welcome.
Thanks.
http://features.cgsociety.org/newgallerycrits/g60/252260/252260_1272312393_large.jpg
http://features.cgsociety.org/newgallerycrits/g60/252260/252260_1272312393_large.jpg

JJASSO
04-28-2010, 07:21 PM
hi and welcome. about your image you need more than just concept and design, you have to understan what elements create a great environment and how to sell the illusion of photo realism
first, you need to make your elements blend in the atmosphere you already have in the photo source, like aerial perspective will help you city look big and with proper scale and depth , the main focal node is almost in the center of the image , killing the visual composition,
in such a day light you would get more detail from the city as well as some interesting highlights from the materials in there, the right down image looks cool, I guess that's how the whole image could use in terms of style and color palette

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