vehicle:honda civic

[wgreenlee1]

I dont know if its my eyes playing tricks with me or not...
But the smooth rounded surfaces dont appear to me that in fact that they are smooth...
For instance:
The top where it runs along paralell with the sunroof looks a wee bit awkward.
The seam of the dorr running vertically looks a little rough...
And you know it looks to be floating...
But overall the form is there...

[Mcf]

looks nice although some headlights would be really great :)
and the edges are too smooth ( like doors, sunroof, etc.. )

anyway its ok - hope you'll find the time to overwork it a bit :)

[EricCartman]

Nice but it looks like the car is floating.

[Airtwist!]

looks good, but look at the door, the gab is going till the ground,

i don´t think that the real honda door look similar!

anyway nice modeling,


Airtwist!

[Dirtystimpy]

oops, I meant to put this in the WIP forum, not finished(it was late)

anyways, thanks for the feedback.

the headlights> Yeah, I still haven't quite figured out how to make those look great, so I've been avoiding it, I just need to suck it up and get em done.

I'll try to fix the other things as well.

[barto9]

pretty cool but that doesnt look like a civic

[liquid6]

Looks prett good, but there are few things that you need to fix. On the headlights, they dont have that extremely hard chopped point on the top outside corner. Second, your wheels and tires look like that they have some serious negitive offset. They stick to far out from the body lines. Last there is a hard crease down the side between the wheels that you do not have. Thses are a few things that need to be fixed, but it is off to a great start :beer:

[animatethat3d]

I like the car's paint and the wheels are pretty cool, too.
The lighting is well done, but the car looks like its floating, the lack of shadows under the tires is whats doing it, I've had the same problems before and I just put a plane (3dsmax) under the tire and the put a falloff opacity map on a black textured plane. Gives the nice soft shadow feel and adds the depth under the tires.
Oh, yeah, and the door edges look to rounded/smooth, they might need just a little harder edge.
Body looks really cool, almost like the body shapes have been modified. Keep posting, the car looks good, I like it.

:thumbsup:

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