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NicholasCaruana
04-23-2010, 08:52 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/nvart/416245_1272055970/680bound
(http://assets.cgsociety.org/nvart/416245_1272055970/1024bound)Hi this is another render with a different time of day, I hope you like it

TMunro
04-23-2010, 10:40 PM
I love the design of this yacht, its really sleek looking, one thing I I cant help noticing though, is there is something funny happening with scale in the image, I'm not sure if its the size of the wooden planks on the wharf, or the water surface but, its giving the image a sort of miniature model/Gerry Anderson feel. Please don't be offended, I love the design, its just an observation I couldn't help making :)

jtrillo
04-23-2010, 10:56 PM
Nice one! This image looks better than the first. I think now the shape of the vehicle is more noticeably. I think the size of the wooden texture and the short range DOF blur (depth of field) gives a macrophotography feeling. Anyway it is interesting. Good luck.
PS sorry for my english.

olbertus
04-24-2010, 11:11 AM
I agree with Tmunro on the strange scale effect but I also love the design and I think it looks more defined under these lighting conditions. I would love to see it with maybe an even simpler background like just under way on the ocean or if you go with a docked view possibly you could add some people for scale.

Anyway nice work!

NicholasCaruana
04-27-2010, 04:44 PM
Hi guys thanks for your comments, I will be doing one in open sea, just for fun, thanks and good luck for your entries

LightSovereign
04-27-2010, 07:52 PM
Yea this is much better, seeing how the +/- spaces are used, especially didn't notice the wooden frames either side of the vehicle. the colours are wonderful too..great work

Marley

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