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saleemian
04-23-2010, 06:41 AM
Hi I Mohammad Reza from karachi i make character animation on maya please tell how u think about my animation and one more thing this my beaning animations

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pem71gJXdCU

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E3fpbgCiYz8

Wilson-3d
04-23-2010, 08:54 PM
Hi saleemian,
Have you checked to make sure your name and information are in the title safe area so that they are not cut off when viewed on a television? You may need to pull them up or have them on a quick title screen.

cheers,

saleemian
04-23-2010, 09:17 PM
hi Wilson-3d

thnx for ur comment but this showreel not for commercial this for my only assignment

but tell me how's animation :)?

Nightkrawler xo
04-24-2010, 02:38 AM
The animation wasn't very good. What do you think about it? Very floaty,the walk for the girl was really weird looking. Go back and learn the basics of animation. Dialogue and multiple characters is advanced stuff and frankly your not there yet and if you can't see some of the errors in your animation,you need to go back and animate bouncing balls. You just can't go swimming for the first time and just jump in the ocean,start off small(baby steps). You will eventually get to where your trying to be,but learn the foundations first,good luck : )

mistasam02
04-24-2010, 10:40 AM
Yea, not good. Start with blocking the characters out. Make the poses more interesting. The movement doesn't matter if the poses aren't working. Also, when people talk, their mouths don't move like puppets. Even for blocking this just doesn't work. You need to go back over this thing and plan it out better. Good luck!

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