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This reel was created for my internship application I would love some critique on all areas.
04-16-2010, 12:50 AM
I would remove the second piece with the guy lifting the stone. he slides like he is on ice and its your weakest piece. I would also remove it because it shows your ability in showing weight and I think the guy lifting the bar bell is way better.
Best of luck!
Thanks, you are completely right, the only reason I had that clip was because I wanted more generalist stuff in there. :)
So I removed the second clip and changed the order of the sneaking scene. One thing that I have to change before I send it out is how the eyelid kinda pops right before the end in the last clip.
Updated version (http://www.vimeo.com/10977075)
04-16-2010, 01:10 PM
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